All Comments on 'The Time Has Come'

All these fantasy stories should be written like this one. I hope you keep up your erotic writing.

An outstanding birthday present---a load of your sperm in her womb, making a baby....

An outstanding birthday present---a load of your sperm in her womb, making a baby....

A young, reluctant tart with a pussy full of sperm that makes her a mommy!!! What a great story!!!

Your story states "Slowly I moved the tip to her virgin canal and pushed slightly. She stiffened. I pulled back and pushed again, moving just a bit deeper. I continued to work my cock in and out, going deeper till I hit her hymen."

Please note, the hymen is NOT deep inside the vagina, but at it's entrance!

This is a good story but spoiled (for me at least) by this common inaccuracy that seems to be included in many "first time" stories on this website. You have all the other anatomical details correct, so you need to be correct with this item as well, unless you are writing for the "Non Human" section. Thank you and please keep writing.