All Comments on 'The Tourist'

As another writer, it was interesting to see how you switched perspectives. I think this is the first time I've seen that done in this genre. I have to say, I'm not particularly fond of it, because it forces your brain to stop and think and literally switch gears, which isn't what most people want from this genre. Of course, if that was part of what you were going for, then good job!

Overall, your writing is quite good, and I especially appreciate your attention to detail.

If you'd like to share ideas, you can write me at sheisamiss@gmail.com. :)

Keep up the good work!