All Comments on 'The Trading Of Freya Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
good

Very nice first story, look forward to seeing more.

msprmmsprmabout 16 years ago
Please continue!

This is a very good start to what I hope will be many more chapters. It's especially nice to see that not all of your males are asses, and your heroine can stand up for herself (all while falling for the hero, of course).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very good

Your story was so far very good :). I do hope you can continue. You had me at the edge of my seat when she was running, trying to get away. But i do have to admit, i do like her fiesty personality...very strong willed. Please continue

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenabout 16 years ago
Very nicely written

and what a fantasy, sexy men who need women to procreate so to save the planet. Who would fight something like that...

wildwildbestwildwildbestabout 16 years ago
this rocks

okay, I just stumbled onto your writing and you are such a cl*t tease...your stories are great. WildWildBest

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Amazing

I love it so far, you are an amazing writer

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