All Comments on 'The Transformation Device Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
The next chapter could go several ways.

Candy does not need the transformation device to get Sara when she has those ear rings. She only has to give her the ear rings as a gift and program her to be her lover and slave after she puts the ear rings on. She seemed to be attracted to Sara the way that she was. There is nothing to change. Are you planning on brother and sister having sex without them knowing they are related? She can then keep the 10 million dollars if she does not have to pay the doctor. Or better yet, she could use the ear rings on the bad doctor to control him or even her own master. But it might be tricky to get them on them. But then she could be the grand master of them.

Miles63Miles63over 11 years agoAuthor
Ear rings reply

Wait till Chapter 3 to find out about the Ear Rings!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
please make more

I love your story. Please make more stories. Hope you make the next one even better.

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