All Comments on 'The Traveler Ch. 02'

Keep the series up, you are doing a great job with the storyline and characters. This one is just as good as or better than the first. Great job!

Joel

Very interesting. The work is only getting better. Watch that spelling though.

You rock!

i have to agree with the others on here, that your work is getting better and better all the time. You have a really good imagination when coming up with new creatures (loved the snakes) and some cool story ideas. Keep them stories coming, dude. Look forward to reading them.

This one and the number one are both excellent and erotic stories.

...and left me hoping that aliens creep into my room tonight.

You have spoiled me with you wickedly go erotica. Shame on you.

Haha the ending got me "where's the maggot!?". I love it that is a good story I jerked a few to that story

So sad it's over! Thoroughly enjoy all of your stories :) keep writing!

There is an abundant amount of evidence supporting the idea that Terra has supported other Extraterrestrial Biological Entities all throughout our past. A past that stretches close to a million years instead of ten thousand. Evidence suggests we have reached similar technological and cultural sophistication a few times in the past. Each time a global cataclysm reset our progress.

My point is that the story fails to account for any variation accounting for existing EBEs who already form colonies in extremely remote locations. 'Belief' in EBEs is irrelevant as the story's premise already establishes their existence in that realm.

In Ch 01, "Kurt?" states that our PTBs are already aware of EBEs. Where were they when all this went down? I mean, sure Kurt does mention wanting to keep this local but with iPhones now it is likely 'something' questionable would be leaked.

For instance, near the end Kurt could have just told Vega that his faction is prohibited from establishing a colony on Terra. The Killer Alien was more of a contract with him being a 'bounty hunter'

What happened to the first story? It seems to have disappeared from Literotica.

Where's Chapter 01?