All Comments on 'The True Cost of a Piece of Ass'

A man as wealthy as Richard staying at a Ramada Inn? Hahahaha!! Not likely! Panama has an extradition treaty with the U.S. Brazil did not the last time I checked. Since they’re not divorced, I don’t think he kidnapped Danny. The way it worked when I went through my divorce, before a divorce decree and custody agreement, both parents have custody and either parent can travel unhindered with the children. It made no sense for Steve to leave a paper trail (digital trail) to his joint account, unless he intended for Sandra to go to prison. Overall, the revenge was pretty lame. There were too many spelling errors. An editor would have been helpful.

Ahhh, doesn't Panama have an extradition treaty with the US?

And soon the extradition papers will arrive for bank fraud and theft and child kidnapping, at the very least. They now know where he is. He is clearly going to be considered the guilty party when it comes to the fraudulent funds transfer. Not smart. What you get for going way over the top with revenge and then running away with the kid. Don't think the author thought this through. Husband also took a long time to realize he was being cheated on. Also why was Richard putting all his effort into liaising with Sandra? A short fling? Execrable, but maybe. But why a sustained affair. One they when they traveled and stayed overnight (still a huge flag), but screwing her at a hotel while hubby was out of town? Apparently Richard was smitten with her. Not very discreet. More realistic if Connie had hired a PI earlier because this MC was not that bright.

When you btb you bab you don't leave her with her dignity intact nor do you leave her lover walking around saying boy oh boy I guess I won't do that again right away. You leave them bloody and bleeding as well as financial fucked.

Wife and her Richard lover got burned... love it!!!

Uhm… those fund transfers are easily traceable and the fault would not lie with her bf but with their computer security. The money can be recovered unless the charity hospitals are crooked, They will know who the culprit is, he used his own accounts. And, now that they know where the MC is they can come after him, probably have him extradited.

I think what I like most about this is the honest way he deals with betrayal. I don't mean hacking the company's bank accounts - I mean the withdrawal and the anger. His anger is very well expressed. I hate to admit it, but I think the wife is all too believable. I've known a few like that, but thankfully they were never mine.

Nothing really new here except the shitass way this author tells the story... again (like a few of his other stories I've read, but won't anymore). Some words missing & punctuation mistakes, but what set the tone was the sentence that unless you've went through what the husband did, you don't understand. Then the next sentence, he doesn't want to hear from the "I know... I'm divorced", etc., statements. Does the author just write something to fill space up? The guy's in business with a friend but causes the friend to lose a customer? Doesn't tell the friend/ co-owner (?? not sure & don't care to find out) where he is? 2 stars for the unrealistic story. Bob

Too bad Slut Sandy......a costly pussy indeed

@gasperguy:

You think it’s better for a young boy to be raised by a whore?!! She would, by her example, teach him that cheating has no consequences, women hold all the power, and men should accept being cucks?!?

To ensure that his son grows up with morals, and masculinity, there are two options: take the son and leave, punishing the other man through money, or killing the whore, and her pimp!

ZK

I read this again. I liked it the first time, but I liked it more this time. It really is true that the best revenge is living well. Foolish people take for granted what they have and lose what is most important. Good life lesson here.

Thanks for your writing.

How about at least $12million being lost.

Maybe one of the female readers can comment on my question. Why in the hell, would a woman that is caught cheating, thinks she has the right, to make her husband accept her continuing to cheat on him? As a man, I believe most men in a similar situation, would accept whatever wifey decided, if she caught him cheating. That means counseling, divorce, etc. But wanting your partner to accept you not only betrayed his trust, but then expect him to accept this as the new norm? You are delusional. 5 stars.

Seeing all the comments about taking his child from his mother, how repulsive it is and yet millions of fathers around the world are stopped from seeing their children (most often while still paying child support ) by vindictive mothers but people tend not to give a fit about that as it’s perfectly legal.

Weak, Especially ending. Nothing to see here, move along....

Ending was a little rushed. 5 stars anyway.

3 stars - standard BTB story with a very slim plot - nothing noteworthy or different.

I really hate when children are involved as pawns for revenge.

Any parent who grabs their kids, runs to another country to "punish" their spouse, regardless of reason, needs their face slammed repeatedly into a brick wall until there is no longer a head on their shoulders!!!

Terrible writing and story line.

so he's a broke world class hacker ??? who's wife felt she needed to get a job? to help out the family? and have him work less?? but he can scrap together a mill in a weekend? wtf

There are a number of stories on Literotica about the husband taking the kids and disappearing. The only problem is that I think at some point the kid(s) would call the Mother, missing her. That would get the husband thrown into jail and ruin the revenge.

The revenge is way over the top! What an asshole. Maybe he will run into some bad guys

I never quite got the phrase 'schoolboy charm'. Schoolboys are the least charming fuckers around.

For oblivious reasons

Bored the next plane

A great BTB from slurping. A really good one.

Not bad. Decent story and mostly well written. Thanks for the good read.

He plans on marrying again,but I don't see anywhere in the story that he got divorced.

Have you ever given a positive comment without some kind of snide barbs? Signed: BTW

He would have moved the money via Bitcoin at one point so the FBI would never have found it! That is what the purpose of Bitcoin. It totally stops anyone from following the money. It’s sole purpose is illegal transactions. That is we must stop the use of Bitcoin currency.

I wonder if He got Checked for STDs ?? One of My Friends Wife Gave him something Extra .. He was able to get it taken care of .. But He could not have Sex for 3 Months .. The highlight was telling the doctor who gave him the STD .. The Doctor was her Doctor since Childhood ..

He needed a beating as well

Even tho I can see thru the money handling bs. Any way it makes for a fun story.

I like BTB stories a lot but they have to contain some modicum of believable actions. This one is not close.

Because dreaming about life being as easy as this story relaxes me and allows me to feel better about Real Life were this revenge could never happened.

Seems he's not afraid Richard would use some money to hunt him down.. Especially since he's doing the same work he did before he shouldn't be to hard to find. The FBI would habe gotten involved, 1.2 million gets attention, and would have been able to trace it. The FBI never forgets about these crimes and never completely stops looking either.

No way Kenny or his old company would hire him, that would be aiding and abetting a criminal. When it came out they knowingly hired him , and it would come out someday, they would be financially ruined and some people probably put in prison. What company, especially banks, would want a company that condones this kind of behavior?

His parents would have been grilled and probably threatened with jail time if they didn't roll on him. Sandy must have some idea where he is since he wrote to "come down here to see Danny". Down here would have only meant south America/ Mexico area and the story kind of implies he told her exactly where he was to see Danny.

But hey, the story was cute, if only wishful thinking.

5*****

she could a reached inside and stuck it out, TK U MLJ LV NV

Count me in, as I love this story. Slirpuff is one of the absolute best writers in LW. The BTB story is the only antidote to the sick cheating and cuckold stories contaminating the site. As the cucks like to say, "If you don't like the BTB story, don't read it."

This is typical of slirpuff. He makes all sorts of unbelievable and impossible details because he is so focused on BTB ending. I am not against BTB stories and endings, as a matter of fact I read that stuff, but one needs to be just a bit more realistic in the plot development and that requires thinking. I don't think slirpuff has enough patience or creativity for that.

Character development is also lacking, the female character is just a complete moronic female but then again this is a typical cliche of BTB stories.

The high grades these stories get just illustrates the large number of depressed and lonely male readers on LE.

How does he know where she is after five years.?How can he get married if he isn't divorced?.If she is as good looking as he says ,how come she hasn't got married again?.

The description of "hacking" done is so stupid that it seems the author has no clue about technical aspect of his story. Little research is really needed here to make it believable.

GREAT story.......,,,,,,,!!!!!!!!!******* BTB.

A rather simplistic stupid story, written and told in a schoolboy fashion and totally unbelievable.

You have no clue how many errors you don't see, mostly because you don't know correct grammar or spelling. "I want to thank Wolf Vixen for her help in catching the error I never seem to see. I could of made a two-chapter story out of this but I wanted to cut it off cleanly, so tell me what you think."

You wrote that 'I could "of" made' ??? WTF? Do you have any idea why that's wrong? Could of? Really?

as for taking the son away., why leave her any access? so she gets custody and support . if able id do it too, the courts fuck men over all the time. 5

The cheating twat got exactly what she deserved!

So did the asshole boss,who lost it all,including a wife who had to be a hell of a loy better than Sandy. His ego nailed that asshole!

Man enough.

This was an excellent story and well written. I read Hansbwl's comment "Stupidity". Well he is totally wrong. I read a number of his stories some of which he doesn't even finish the dam story. The 3 stories that I read were poorly written. The plots were terrible. In one the husband is shown a picture of his wife's pussy being enter by another man's penis. So he leaves her due to her cheating. His wife is a lawyer so she shows a picture of her pussy to the judge during their divorce trial to prove that her pussy isn't the one in the picture. When the husband understands that his wife didn't cheat, the wife still wants the divorce because the husband should have believed in her innocence. This is really stupid writing. Also the story states that she gets a warrant to enter someone else's house based on heresay evidence. Hansbwl should just give up writing!

you spend so much time finding ways to get a supposed revenge that hurts lots of people including, in the end a son. If all the crap this character did was done in real time he would be caught and in jail. Love these stories of revenge where the revenge makes the character worse than the original sinner.

We must do something to end their fictional suffering! We must march on Washington to make this fictional blight end!

bleh I've seen too many kids end up over medicated and brainwashed by 'good' mothers that 'only cheated' to even consider marking this story down for that.

The story was a solid good read. I will give it a 5 Star. But in reality the child paid the price by being taken from his mom. Was she a no good cheating scum bucket of a wife? Yes, but she didn't do drugs, nor directly abuse her child, she didn't murder anyone. Made a mistake? You bet yah! Nothing in the story showed she was an unfit mother just a wife who made a "big" mistake. We or most of us either forgive and/or move on. But in my line of work I see a lot of men take children away from mom's because; "you done me wrong and you are going to pay". The true payee is the child/children. Oh well it was just a story well written but from a male's point of view. I can always tell. At least he wasn't a "brave" man and beat the hell out of her.

Meh

If they did not have a child, I would be saying well done.

But, they had a son, so he turned from hero to douchebag the moment he stole the son.

You want to divorce a cheating cunt, fine. But, you don't destroy his mother.

Yeah it sucks that she would probably have custody, the house, etc, but that is the price you pay for bad choices, like marrying a cheating cunt (even when you don't know she was going to turn into one).

You make sure you stay close and visit the son every chance you can.

On the plus side, you did not have the father abandoning his son while destroying the wife and son like that lowlife scumbag piece of shit huedogg does.

Why do spouses ( both husbands and wives) cheat on their spouses? Is the thrill that thrilling? Can't be or why do they regret it after getting caught. Only the cheaters will know these answers

he said in the begining of the story he had a fake passport. Then a bit later he said he had several fakes. You don think someone who can get several fake passports couldnt get one also for his son? WTF you must be stupid. And besides it is a fictional story dont take it so seriously.

I think you must be bastard D Wornoutcocks' brother. He too is an authority unto himself on all things legal. Got some news for you Professor...passports for all three of my kids did not require my wife's signature. Just mine and their birth certificates, pictures and the requisite dollars. Must have worked, we're still traveling. The wife BTW had remarried several months before we needed to travel and applied for passports. Want to explain that counsellor?

Why are all these wives, who LOVE their husbands, unable to resist the "charm" o these predators who seem to have nothing better to do than steal other men's wives, who, more often than not, aren't even as attractive as the predator's own wife?

But a couple of obvious flaws. He never would have been able to get a passport for his son without Sandy's signature. So the kid wasn't leaving the Country on a plane. The authorities would have been watching his parents closely. If his partner could find him you don't think others could? After all he's a kidnapper. And most small kids that age would have tried to call Mom. Steve would have never made it out of the country with his son and if he had, he would have been back in prison in less than 6 weeks. Bad story telling. Poorly thought out. Nice fantasy though.

Most guys fantasize about screwing some beautiful girl. But you moronic BTB guys dream about getting and then doing unrealistically stupid things to others. Amazing.

....would have been to funnel a small amount of his cheating wife's money and her lover's money to a terrorist bank account. That way, she would be facing years in a Federal prison, he would be granted full custody, and his cheating slut wife would probably pick up a few new diseases in prison. Of course, as an accomplice to terrorists, lover boy would spend his time down at Club Gitmo, learning how much those radicals make love to a pretty white boy when the lights go out.......

You are a good writer, and I enjoy most of your stories, but I take issue with you on two aspects of your story. One is the fact that, if anything, he's worse and more selfish than she is. Yes, she's screwing another guy. That's bad and a terrible affront to him. So, she's betrayed you, divorce her and seek custody. Instead, he moves to Panama, exposes his son to a living situation that's not anything like tha quality of almost anywhere in the U.S., and also deprives his parents of not only his company, but the joys of being with their grandchild. Also, even if Panama doesn't have an extradition treaty with the U.S., if you think that pressure wouldn't be brought to return him and the child to the U.S. after he entered Panama illegally under an assumed name and on an illegal passport after a theft like this, you'd have to be dreaming.

For all the reasons javmor79 hated it. What an ass! How could anyone be stupid enough to believe a self-centered cheating slut wouldn't be a damaging influence on her children? Well, dumb asses aside, this was a breath of fresh air. So nice to read about a real man taking care of business.

How do you fall UNDER charm? You fall under a spell. And his 'schoolboy charm'? Schoolboys do it for her, huh?

Re: Kidnapping. A parent cannot kidnap their own child, unless they don't have legal custody, which EVERY parent has, while still married to the other parent. If they were divorced before he left, and she won custody, THEN it would be kidnapping. Just as any divorced parent that has full custody, can legally leave the state, or country, forever, and the other parent can do nothing. I know a guy whose ex wife's new husband got a job offer 3000 miles away, so they moved, leaving the guy with no recourse, and he only gets to see his son via Skype. As his lawyer told him, she has full custody, so she can legally go where she pleases. To say he is bitter, would be an understatement.

and Viva Mexico for a new start. TK U MLJ LV NV

Your comments are some of the funniest I've read on this site. I hope to God you weren't trying to be serious, because that would just be pathetic.

In order to be an effective editor, one must also be literate. Please!

He was a little kid, probably thought her name was mom. How do you look that up in the phone book? Oh yeah, he was too young to know how to read. Why would the law try to get him extradited? He was in Panama. Do you think that we have an extradition treaty with them? Besides, he knew the babysitter and his grandparents better than he knew his mom. She was always out getting stuffed. And just for shits and giggles let me ask. Why do you think he would be better off with his mother, you man hating bitch?

Danny missed his Mother and called her. The FBI contacted The State Dept and he and Danny were returned to the states. He was in handcuffs. All his funds were impounded and one month later he was spending 18 years to life in a Federal Prison and she had her son and all his money. This wasn't even a good fantasy. He was the real bad guy in this.

like a cutting accent, bad grammar / spelling can ruin a story. Simply ..the ones below jumped at me without any effort on my behalf. Not your usual self. Used a new / no editor this time I would guess.

Bored a plane... really!!

so hard; - why the semi colon

So why's he screwing around with my wife, probably because he can..... there was a good place for a semi colon.. not a comma

so much over time... (overtime)

she tried to reasoned with me..(tried to reason or she reasoned)

"How long have you know?" she finally asked....(known)

Her comments at the charity auction were red flags, and frankly, I would have rubbed her face in the crusty panties, then had a DNA test done on them.

Judy My first wife was fucking on me, I was too dunb and trusting to believe the fucking . signs. One night I ate a box full of come, spit it out and went back to fucking her. Then my neighbor started giving me numorius hints. My dumb ass started to finally get it. My best friend was fucking her while I was at work. Once her dad asked how good a piece of ass I thought she was, Did I think she was well broken in?

She once asked me if I would fuck any of our daughters if we ever had any. Within 90 days we were in divorce court and I was screwing married a woman from work that said her husband took her for granite, what ever that ment. Then she told me about a really hot girl that had a crush on me she was jealious and warned me stay away from Connie. I moved on after I found out her husband was really a great guy and family man that really loved his wife and kids.

Connie and I moved into together into a high end club apartment. She was always ready to fuck, but she would make up the most fantastic drama stories. I moved out after ninety days. For the next 2 years I fucked any and every one I could, half of them married, including my still best friends wife. I asked to get him to eat her cunt full of my cum, the sick son of a bitch liked it, so much for revenge. She admited screwing around but never told him with who. She knew he had been fucking Judy.

Then one day in the last few days of summer my neighbor girl threw her pussy into my face, I was hooked. We have been married 51 years next february. I caught her fucking a friend and kept quiet about it. I simply fucked her raw and never let her know I saw them..

One day she told me one of our kids was fatherd by my younger brother, I told her to stop talking I did not want to know the details or which one as I love all three of my girls and that is it. And never to let on to the girls, she agreed

I used to drink heavy. get sloppy drunk and get laid. I never admited it except for one My wife to this day does not believe I did it .

She fell for her bosses school boy charm? Huh? Come again? She was a social climbing whore looking to trade up. The unlikely part was that he would be seen with her, let alone fuck her. She wasn't worth the risk to his reputation and could have been fucking another model quality bimbo. Too bad we all learn too late who we really married. Some of us are lucky, some of us are not so lucky!

First, I spent 2 years there during my first tour in the early to mid '90s. Yeah, it's not that great a place.

Second, Panama has an extradition treaty with the US, and Steve would have been detained and extradited in no time flat once they found him.

4 Stars, but the use of Panama as an escape location cost 1.

This story was a fun read with a lot of bells and whistles. Like most fantasies, there are certain plausibility concerns but not over-powering. In this day and age, it is very difficult to escape a spouse will h a child in tow without discovery. In addition, the discipline of the child to remain in isolation from his/her other parent would be difficult if not impossible. Overall, this story was well presented and very enjoyable.

One, he was sending his mom stuff and Kenny found him. Which means that anyone looking for him (read the Police and the FBI since he kidnapped his son) would have found him eventually. His revenge wouldn't have been happy spent in jail. Two, as his son grew up, he would have questioned everything. Kids do that. He would have found his Mom, Grandmothers or friends on Facebook and that would have lead the Police to him. Either way, he's toast.

Not happy with taking a child away from either parent. Short of Abuse, there is no reason why either parent should separate the other from the child. Especially like this, with no warning and no plans on how visitation is going to go. That is so unfair to the child. When one spouse cheats, they cheat on the other spouse, not the children. To say that cheating on you makes the other spouse undeserving of the child's love is so wrong. It's wrong when women do it in divorces, and its wrong when men do it. I really have to say that didn't like this story. I liked his revenge (short of kidnapping his kid and fleeing the country), but this story didn't sit well.

The guy was right not to take the 7 million dollars to give up his liver.

You've only got ONE, and you need it for.... Well there's a hint in the name: LIVEr!

It is a lack of research.

Outside of some Arab countries who are happy to let their men steal children, MOST nations require that both parents sign off on the visa application of a child entering their country just to avoid such situations.

This totally ignores how Mr. Alias is somehow bringing a kid of another name out of the country. Plus by bringing the kid, the KID is leaving a paper trail a mile wide to follow.

This point could have easily be written around by him hooking up with a coyote smuggler going the other way into Mexico and traveling around from that side. OR he could have chartered a private plane. But it's more likely that it didn't occur to the author.

Not glaring, just a bit irritating.

For a guy who loved and trusted his choice of wife, he didn't seem to get emotional at all? Maybe, in this day and age, young people really don't know or understand the warm and exhilarating emotions of romantic love and sex...I guess?

Anyway, believably possible as a fictional/fantasy story and really enjoyable...short, to the point and complete with no loose ends.

Thanks again!

The real problem is the lack of character development on the part of Sandy. We can't care, or get truly angry with a character that we barely know.

Excellent beginning but a very unsatisfying ending. The reader never truly got to hear her side of the story or feel her remorse - kind of hard to do from a thousand miles away. Thanks.

Your story reminds people that life doesn't have a delete button, or a replay feature. We live with every decision we make.

"5"

That's how you treat a cheating skank slut whore cunt low life wife. You take everything away from her and her asshole prick lover and leave with the kids for a better life. Ha Ha Ha

OH YEAH

damn it sure worked for me. 5

and, yes, I know that its only a story, the man (usually) takes revenge which is, in my opinion, way out of line with the offense.

The husband in this story has no right to deprive his son of his mother's presence. This will bight him, and rightly so, in the ass when the son is old enough to determine his own life. (In fact, he has no right to deprive the mother of her son!)

"Vengence is mine", sayeth somebody.

Rich

The wife who knowingly cheated multiple times with a married man her boss, describes it in hindsight "as falling under Richard's school boy charm". Please, she was a the time a married woman and a mother and now we are to believe that fucking,

lying to her husband and friends knowingly was because somehow she became overwhelmed by a married man's "school boy charms". We all went through school but what the fuck is talking about ? What the hell are school boy charms when you are a middle aged married wife and mother ? She comes across as incredibly stupid and far to naive to a middle aged woman. This description by the author the cheating wife's motivation for adultery is by far the weakest part of the story.

Never learn the depth of love

very strange to be bed-fellows. TK U MLJ LV NV

Obviously, horrible to take the kid from the mother like that. But, it is a fantasy piece. I get it.

READ the story!!! The Board of Directors at Logan Industries made Richard make good for the 'donations.' Since Logan Industries wasn't claiming a theft had occurred, there was no reason for the bank or the FBI to ever become involved. You know DW, somebody famous once said, "It's better to keep quiet and be thought a fool than to speak and remove all doubt."

people get in and out of the US every fucking day. 1000's of people take their kids and go back to the home country. He moved on and did it fast enough not to get stopped.

Totally unrealistic story for a whole bunch of reasons:

Getting your kid out the country using a fake passport and his real birth certificate. In your dreams! In normal conditions, you need the other parent's authorization and you'll get questioned a lot at passport control when you leave the country. The boy would need his own passport or an inclusion on the parent's passport, neither was done, and impossible in that short time frame it took to execute his plans.

I doubt that with a passport like his he would be able to get past passport control. His employer would not take the risk of using fake passports without making sure that the proper authorities are aware about them and about the purpose they are intended for. They would be flagged the minute they are scanned at the airport. Also, passport like this would be locked when not used during specific operations, so his own employer would be prosecuting him not offering him a a buyout or a job!

There is an extradition treaty between the USA and Panama since 1905. The FBI would have had him back in a parcel gift wrapped (the USA almost runs Panama) and his plan was stupid enough to leave a trail as big an elephant behind him. Transferring the money to his own savings for a start is a crime and the story says that the authorities investigated and suspected his wife. Of course they were so heartbroken that they decided to give him a break.

There is no explanation how he managed to open eight foreign bank accounts in such a short time frame and without initial deposits. Even experienced money launderers take longer to buy existing accounts.

There is no way on earth transfers of that nature could happen in a few hours, especially to foreign accounts on a xmas eve. It would take days and can always be stopped.

Otherwise nice try :)

Even if he could steal the $million the bank would have to make it up and the FBI would be on the case big time.

If it was just limited to taking his son out of the country, the story would have been a good story and worth a 5. However, stealing a $million is so unrealistic I gave it a 2.

Most of the plot is very possible. The details might be padded but I can cut Slirpuff some slack. Hubby took a million dollars but gave most of it to charity. It was money intended for charity anyway, he just decided who to give it to. Since he is out of the country not many people are going to get too excited about tracking him down, certainly not about taking his child or divorce matters. Let's be serious. If you go to another state it is often difficult to follow through about child custody or divorce. And a million just isn't that much money and he doesn't even have it to recover. Can they even prove that he took the money? There's circumstantial evidence but proof? It would have to be pretty solid to force extradition. I have a strong background in computer security. A sharp person could access these accounts like a ghost, hiding all their identity. If forensic guys got their hands on his computer they might find a link but with a sharp cookie there wouldn't be much and they DON'T have his computer. Could he move down to South America and get a job doing security work, of course. There were certainly some security measures in place already in banks there but many places have insufficient protection and the threats are always evolving. A sharp person could easily make a nice living. <br><br>

I enjoyed the story because the husband took strong action. Remember that Logan was a rich, powerful guy used to doing whatever he wanted. His wife was a gold digger. They certainly deserved what they got. <br><br>

It seemed like the story got sloppy at the end. There were many grammar errors and the story seemed rushed. I would have like to get more info from and about the wife. Revenge is only as good as the suffering it causes.

So final. It felt cold to me. But I think I liked the story. Sounds a bit silly doesn't it? Thank you for the story. You write, I read. Who puts in more effort? Not me. Jim

I Love Paybacks.....Sharon, life has been cruel to your beautiful body, as you have been so to me, now YOU are stone fuckin ugly almost as ugly as your soul and that makes me very happy....THANK YOU GOD....Mike's friend Bill

Fantastic reading as usual , I wish others would write stories like you and PAPATOAD . They are extremely well written , very real to life and show life's consequences that eventually have to be payed for what a person does . You dont shrink away from the subject of aids and other topics too many of the " fantasy" theme writers do on this site that is just peddling crap that no person with a brain could read twice , much less believe . Bravo ! keep the stories coming .

While still a realistic four star story, this one lacked the character development I have found in your other work. Richard is totally two dimensional and Sandy is not much better. Could I write something better? - Of course not., but I have learned to expect better from you

It's now 2010 and you continue to just pound out stuff and post it. Your story ideas are imaginative and carry well. I don't enjoy your males characters who don't think much of females in general, mostly see them as just pussy. Having your hubbies strut around as wounded banty rooster thinking how "powerful" he is in getting his revenge. Revenge isn't really an important part of a strong, mature person's character anyway. I guess the author gets a rush thinking about hurting someone else. It's hard to tell what is really accomplished with all that. Something to consider anyway. Some of the other stories don't have so much viral anger in them and are more interesting.

OK, maybe it's a good story - but I thought Literotica is suppposed to focus on erotic stories; where's the eroticism?

A couple of comments. First, taking your child outside the Country, as has been pointed out, is definitively NOT a crime, unless you are not the custodial parent, or under a court order not to do so. As an attorney, I could tell you stories about parents who have done this time and again.

Next, moving the money was a crime, but unless someone moves to prosecute him, probably no downside to what he did. At the end, only Richard suffered the loss, because the company got reimbursement.

Finally, the slut bitch got what she deserved. I'm glad to see/read stories about cheating slut wives who get caught, and suffer the consequences. Good for you Slirpuff. Now, w/ an editor, most of your jarring grammatical errors have been eliminated, so your stuff is always a good read now. Keep up the good work.