All Comments on 'The True Cost of a Piece of Ass'

Obviously nothing new, but a lot of fun. A Happy 2010 to

Slirpuff!

Really enjoyed it, looking foward to more stories, happy New Years.

Overall I liked it a lot. Your writing is getting better with each piece. You do still need to work on your point of view (POV), it keeps changing from first to third person. It also changes from Husband to Wife without the necessary lead in. This makes it more of a challenge to follow the story.

All in all a nice story, keep up the good work.

Tyr

Keep up the good work, I look forward to your stories

Good to see you're working on your POV issues. The last couple of paragraphs saw you returning to your bad old ways, but at least you're getting better.

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Thanks for the effort.

Firstly: Cheating is no crime, kidnapping is serious crime. Secondly: To break into banks security systems and then get a jobb to fix it does not work. You are in dream land. Thirdly: Moving money into an account where he had access is pure stupidity. He could not make a better trail and thus leave a BIG visiting card who did it, knowing his jobb. So this guy would have been found and would serve many years in prison. Please write something that is logical. To all commentators praising this revenge, use your head!!

I iddn't realize some many english majors read these stories. For the rest of us uneducated people, great story.

I liked this story. It's a pity Sandy couldn't control herself. Anyway nice revenge story. Kep the stories coming.

Good story. Read this three times as an antidote to all the cuckold crap infecting this fine site.

you got a laugh out of me. Thanks NYMINUS

Child kidnapping, because that's what he did, would net him a serious prison sentance and because he skipped out, he would be in default and be forced to pay heavy alimony. Plus, he would lose his son and so forth and so forth. You never really explained why she slept with Richard or why she was crying so much when she was discovered....it could have been way better.

Too much like my first failure(marriage)which, with hindsight, should have ended like a step on a bug. Of course in reality my pain, but much, much more devastatingly the pain of my two boys as their mama disappeared from our lives was pretty hard to deal with. Could've broken me. Almost did. Should make me an expert on misogyny, but it don't. Because I was the most unliveable with mofo of all time, and that was not what i'd promised her when we wed. It feels good to have survived and especially to still LOVE women, after all we owe them. After all it's in their hands we lie at either end of our lives...a pretty drunk Mancelt signing off now and wishing you ALL well...

stories can be feel-good and reaslitic at the same time. this one is a "feel-good" story but it's totally stupid and unbelivable. okay, so the stupid wife went from one big dick to another, as a total loser that she was... but that doesn't minimize the fact that the husband has violate some major finance laws, in different countries. when he did what he did, the stupid wife is the last thing he should worry about; it's the law man (FBI) and tax man (IRS) that are on his trail. of course, it's totally unbelievable because the story wants to say neither law branc is able to catch him, years out, when he and his parents have been communicating, with them planning to join him down there, with at least a vacation home, etc. <p>

again, since the feel good --- stepping on a cheating spouse, as she had done him, and sending her on her way to getting big black pimps with big dicks, etc., working as a big cock loving prostitute --- already worked, all the author had to do was edit the other parts a bit and the story would have had some semi reality feel to it, too. <p>

to say, if the buddy from his old line of work, as well as his parents, have been able to come knock on his door out of the blue, that the FBI, IRS, or other authorities couldn't trace him and his activities, with paper trail, postcards, back and forth messages,,, to say that's realistic, SIMPLY because the stupid wife fucked around on him,,,, that nonsense ruined a decently revenge story...

Much better than most of your half assed storys. Keep writing you are getting better.

great Christmas present of sorrow [of which the bitch truly deserves]. Well done author - you are finally getting away from the "wimp male character" stories and coming back into your better stories. We appreciate the effort - a lot!

<p>Sorry that <i><b>SOME</b></i> of the readers didn't entirely catch what you wrote. And those folks know who they are. They did a three part break down below. (^_^)</p>

<p>- First: in your story there was no kidnapping. Under U.S. law one parent <i>doesn't</i> have any more rights than the other parent to a child, unless there is an order of protection or custody agreement (such as in a divorce decree). If you're "not" the custodial parent after a <i>divorce</i> and you take a child anywhere the the other parent doesn't know where you are its kidnapping. If your not divorced and disappear with the child it's not. Plain and simple. Easy to look up and verify.</p>

<p>And she could have gotten the divorce after the fact and gotten custody, but has to have him served first with the order to make it legal. Long as she doesn't it isn't until that point in time. That's why process servers are hired and they do the whole "You are served" to make sure you're aware of what's going on.</p>

<p>- Second: In your story someone within the banking structure hired this guy to test the bank's <i><b>branch</b></i> system. I was asked to do the same thing for the wireless security of the local airport as a third party contractor because I also do security at my current job. It <i>does</i> happen all the time. It amazes me the number of folks who just <i>assume</i> because it doesn't sound possible to them it can't be. I does happen</p>

<p>Third: He moved the money <i>because</i> he wanted to leave a trail. DUH!! How did the below reader who did the three point break down miss that?? He needed a way to make his wife look guilty also and to make the higher up's of Richards ask some tough questions after he provided them with proof of their adultery on company time.</p>

<p>They could have went after Sandy, but they wouldn't have gotten it back. Richard was the better choice. Legally they can sue just him for all of the money and make <i><b>him</b></i> go after her for the other half of the money.</p>

<p>They don't have to go after only the husband, or the wife Sandy, because the joint account was used as a filter. All that they needed to prove was that if it wasn't for Sandy and Richards involvement it wouldn't have happened. Or maybe they threatened to destroy him if he didn't. Or maybe..... It could be any one of a "Hundred" different reasons they made Richard pay them back.</p>

<p>So its entirely <i>believable</i> that they sued only Richard and made him go after Sandy and her husband. That's entirely their choice to do for his using her for "fake" charities while on company time.</p>

<p>My god its not that hard to see that this could be probable. I think someone a few comments below me just didn't like the ending. But I thought it was really enjoyable!!</p>

<p>The only thing I wouldn't have let him do was provide proof of his involvement as a parting note. But long as he's hiding out in a country that doesn't have extradition, and the Logan company got their money back, only Richard has a reason to go after him for what he did and he's now broke (^_^)</p>

-Risq

<p>PS: I really find it funny that "hansbwl" wants to ream you for your story because he didn't like it, and not that long ago he wrote a childish <i>bash</i> story to get back at Harry and I for doing what he <i>just</i> did to you in his comment below. All because we didn't like his story about a woman who cheated on her husband, reveled in how great it was, and later brags about how she got away with it because she outsmarted everyone.</p>

<p>Funny how the word "hypocrite" comes to mind when I think of his name lately........ >=)</p>

The revenge makes lots of us smile; we're glad the cheating bitch and her lover were "punished," never mind the improbable nature of the plot line and the likelihood, as others pointed out, that our "hero" would actually be the one suffering the punishment. I think more editing is needed in the grammatical department; to and too are used incorrectly in at least one instance. I also chuckled at, "For oblivious reasons I couldn't tell anyone where I was going . . . " I assume the word should have been "obvious" rather than "oblivious." As I and others have stated in regard to lots of stories on this site, we don't expect Shakespeare but reasonably good grammar and proper word usage do help the enjoyment of the story for many readers. Thanks for writing an entertaining and fun fantasy of just desserts.

She is a cheating slut and he is a major league thief. If both parents are working that is a high probabilty that part fo the money he withdrew was hers. Leaving her the house and whatever made no difference, we are not dealing from a high moral viewpoint. He has neither a smart viewpoint, since he spent part of Richard's money from the company, he best have no communications with his frends or parents untl the statue of limitations runs out. I have no idea how long the law allows for civil suits.

What is hard to believe is that there would be only one bank security company in the foreign country or a US bank or security company would worry about it. The world has trillions of dollars in tens of thousands of banks and the idea that one of the few countries without extradition would have had no bank computer security until he arrived is funny.

If the room temperature IQ readers want their big black pimps, I suggest that they should limit their reading to that type of story or write their own (Hopefully to be posted somewhere I have never heard of).

Story was nicely developed and straight to the point. It was well written and hit on all the necessary points. Thanks for sharing.

I'm still gonna give you a 5/100, and I even read the story twice, but for the life of me I can not figure out the total cost of this piece of ass! I mean I'm pretty good at doing my guzinta's too. I truly think that you did not give enough pertinent info to cumpute the total. You know, 2 guzinta 2 one time, 2 guzinta 4 two times, etc. Were you implying maybe, time lost. Anyway, the 1 guzinta 1, and you were not one of the ones means she lost three, you and the children, so I'm saying three people were lost and the cost was priceless. Cheers! Thanks for sharing the tales.

. . . and you know how much I Love a Happy Ending!

(If that wimp hansbwl doesn't like it, you know it must be good)

<p>It may not have been kidnapping but I can tell you for a certainty that the US Department of State will not issue a passport to a minor unless 1) both parents apply in person or 2)one parent signs a permission slip and has it notarized. I had to take a day off from work to go with my wife when we needed a passport for my kids.</p>

i like the idea of justice, but in this story it was as much the INNOCENT who paid as the guilty! <P>

the son was custody kidnapped and suffered the stress of "mother death".

and then the Bank members suffered because of the THEFT. yeah, they got it all back - but what about the interest?

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would this guy have murdered an innocent granny just to frame his ex and her lover? he didn't, but that was just because he was more familiar with bank theft.

<p> now you may not agree, but that is why i scored you low.

....more exposition of the wife's choice of material dreams over her own child. Risq's comments were excellent,and to the anon who revised the "kidnap" issue I would caution that there are at least two ways to get minor out of country without both spouses aware,in a way that satisfies story demands.(well, there was until last year when U.S. demanded passports to visit Canada.)-the other is private jet.

....innocent granny just for revenge"....what the f#&k does that have to do with anything? Frankly, if I personally were upset enough, I'd murder the whole world. Fuck your "Granny"!

A couple of comments. First, taking your child outside the Country, as has been pointed out, is definitively NOT a crime, unless you are not the custodial parent, or under a court order not to do so. As an attorney, I could tell you stories about parents who have done this time and again.

Next, moving the money was a crime, but unless someone moves to prosecute him, probably no downside to what he did. At the end, only Richard suffered the loss, because the company got reimbursement.

Finally, the slut bitch got what she deserved. I'm glad to see/read stories about cheating slut wives who get caught, and suffer the consequences. Good for you Slirpuff. Now, w/ an editor, most of your jarring grammatical errors have been eliminated, so your stuff is always a good read now. Keep up the good work.

OK, maybe it's a good story - but I thought Literotica is suppposed to focus on erotic stories; where's the eroticism?

It's now 2010 and you continue to just pound out stuff and post it. Your story ideas are imaginative and carry well. I don't enjoy your males characters who don't think much of females in general, mostly see them as just pussy. Having your hubbies strut around as wounded banty rooster thinking how "powerful" he is in getting his revenge. Revenge isn't really an important part of a strong, mature person's character anyway. I guess the author gets a rush thinking about hurting someone else. It's hard to tell what is really accomplished with all that. Something to consider anyway. Some of the other stories don't have so much viral anger in them and are more interesting.

While still a realistic four star story, this one lacked the character development I have found in your other work. Richard is totally two dimensional and Sandy is not much better. Could I write something better? - Of course not., but I have learned to expect better from you

Fantastic reading as usual , I wish others would write stories like you and PAPATOAD . They are extremely well written , very real to life and show life's consequences that eventually have to be payed for what a person does . You dont shrink away from the subject of aids and other topics too many of the " fantasy" theme writers do on this site that is just peddling crap that no person with a brain could read twice , much less believe . Bravo ! keep the stories coming .

I Love Paybacks.....Sharon, life has been cruel to your beautiful body, as you have been so to me, now YOU are stone fuckin ugly almost as ugly as your soul and that makes me very happy....THANK YOU GOD....Mike's friend Bill

So final. It felt cold to me. But I think I liked the story. Sounds a bit silly doesn't it? Thank you for the story. You write, I read. Who puts in more effort? Not me. Jim

Most of the plot is very possible. The details might be padded but I can cut Slirpuff some slack. Hubby took a million dollars but gave most of it to charity. It was money intended for charity anyway, he just decided who to give it to. Since he is out of the country not many people are going to get too excited about tracking him down, certainly not about taking his child or divorce matters. Let's be serious. If you go to another state it is often difficult to follow through about child custody or divorce. And a million just isn't that much money and he doesn't even have it to recover. Can they even prove that he took the money? There's circumstantial evidence but proof? It would have to be pretty solid to force extradition. I have a strong background in computer security. A sharp person could access these accounts like a ghost, hiding all their identity. If forensic guys got their hands on his computer they might find a link but with a sharp cookie there wouldn't be much and they DON'T have his computer. Could he move down to South America and get a job doing security work, of course. There were certainly some security measures in place already in banks there but many places have insufficient protection and the threats are always evolving. A sharp person could easily make a nice living. <br><br>

I enjoyed the story because the husband took strong action. Remember that Logan was a rich, powerful guy used to doing whatever he wanted. His wife was a gold digger. They certainly deserved what they got. <br><br>

It seemed like the story got sloppy at the end. There were many grammar errors and the story seemed rushed. I would have like to get more info from and about the wife. Revenge is only as good as the suffering it causes.

Even if he could steal the $million the bank would have to make it up and the FBI would be on the case big time.

If it was just limited to taking his son out of the country, the story would have been a good story and worth a 5. However, stealing a $million is so unrealistic I gave it a 2.

Totally unrealistic story for a whole bunch of reasons:

Getting your kid out the country using a fake passport and his real birth certificate. In your dreams! In normal conditions, you need the other parent's authorization and you'll get questioned a lot at passport control when you leave the country. The boy would need his own passport or an inclusion on the parent's passport, neither was done, and impossible in that short time frame it took to execute his plans.

I doubt that with a passport like his he would be able to get past passport control. His employer would not take the risk of using fake passports without making sure that the proper authorities are aware about them and about the purpose they are intended for. They would be flagged the minute they are scanned at the airport. Also, passport like this would be locked when not used during specific operations, so his own employer would be prosecuting him not offering him a a buyout or a job!

There is an extradition treaty between the USA and Panama since 1905. The FBI would have had him back in a parcel gift wrapped (the USA almost runs Panama) and his plan was stupid enough to leave a trail as big an elephant behind him. Transferring the money to his own savings for a start is a crime and the story says that the authorities investigated and suspected his wife. Of course they were so heartbroken that they decided to give him a break.

There is no explanation how he managed to open eight foreign bank accounts in such a short time frame and without initial deposits. Even experienced money launderers take longer to buy existing accounts.

There is no way on earth transfers of that nature could happen in a few hours, especially to foreign accounts on a xmas eve. It would take days and can always be stopped.

Otherwise nice try :)

people get in and out of the US every fucking day. 1000's of people take their kids and go back to the home country. He moved on and did it fast enough not to get stopped.

READ the story!!! The Board of Directors at Logan Industries made Richard make good for the 'donations.' Since Logan Industries wasn't claiming a theft had occurred, there was no reason for the bank or the FBI to ever become involved. You know DW, somebody famous once said, "It's better to keep quiet and be thought a fool than to speak and remove all doubt."

Obviously, horrible to take the kid from the mother like that. But, it is a fantasy piece. I get it.

very strange to be bed-fellows. TK U MLJ LV NV

Never learn the depth of love

The wife who knowingly cheated multiple times with a married man her boss, describes it in hindsight "as falling under Richard's school boy charm". Please, she was a the time a married woman and a mother and now we are to believe that fucking,

lying to her husband and friends knowingly was because somehow she became overwhelmed by a married man's "school boy charms". We all went through school but what the fuck is talking about ? What the hell are school boy charms when you are a middle aged married wife and mother ? She comes across as incredibly stupid and far to naive to a middle aged woman. This description by the author the cheating wife's motivation for adultery is by far the weakest part of the story.

and, yes, I know that its only a story, the man (usually) takes revenge which is, in my opinion, way out of line with the offense.

The husband in this story has no right to deprive his son of his mother's presence. This will bight him, and rightly so, in the ass when the son is old enough to determine his own life. (In fact, he has no right to deprive the mother of her son!)

"Vengence is mine", sayeth somebody.

Rich

damn it sure worked for me. 5

That's how you treat a cheating skank slut whore cunt low life wife. You take everything away from her and her asshole prick lover and leave with the kids for a better life. Ha Ha Ha

OH YEAH

"5"

Your story reminds people that life doesn't have a delete button, or a replay feature. We live with every decision we make.

Excellent beginning but a very unsatisfying ending. The reader never truly got to hear her side of the story or feel her remorse - kind of hard to do from a thousand miles away. Thanks.

The real problem is the lack of character development on the part of Sandy. We can't care, or get truly angry with a character that we barely know.

For a guy who loved and trusted his choice of wife, he didn't seem to get emotional at all? Maybe, in this day and age, young people really don't know or understand the warm and exhilarating emotions of romantic love and sex...I guess?

Anyway, believably possible as a fictional/fantasy story and really enjoyable...short, to the point and complete with no loose ends.

Thanks again!

It is a lack of research.

Outside of some Arab countries who are happy to let their men steal children, MOST nations require that both parents sign off on the visa application of a child entering their country just to avoid such situations.

This totally ignores how Mr. Alias is somehow bringing a kid of another name out of the country. Plus by bringing the kid, the KID is leaving a paper trail a mile wide to follow.

This point could have easily be written around by him hooking up with a coyote smuggler going the other way into Mexico and traveling around from that side. OR he could have chartered a private plane. But it's more likely that it didn't occur to the author.

Not glaring, just a bit irritating.

The guy was right not to take the 7 million dollars to give up his liver.

You've only got ONE, and you need it for.... Well there's a hint in the name: LIVEr!

Not happy with taking a child away from either parent. Short of Abuse, there is no reason why either parent should separate the other from the child. Especially like this, with no warning and no plans on how visitation is going to go. That is so unfair to the child. When one spouse cheats, they cheat on the other spouse, not the children. To say that cheating on you makes the other spouse undeserving of the child's love is so wrong. It's wrong when women do it in divorces, and its wrong when men do it. I really have to say that didn't like this story. I liked his revenge (short of kidnapping his kid and fleeing the country), but this story didn't sit well.

One, he was sending his mom stuff and Kenny found him. Which means that anyone looking for him (read the Police and the FBI since he kidnapped his son) would have found him eventually. His revenge wouldn't have been happy spent in jail. Two, as his son grew up, he would have questioned everything. Kids do that. He would have found his Mom, Grandmothers or friends on Facebook and that would have lead the Police to him. Either way, he's toast.

This story was a fun read with a lot of bells and whistles. Like most fantasies, there are certain plausibility concerns but not over-powering. In this day and age, it is very difficult to escape a spouse will h a child in tow without discovery. In addition, the discipline of the child to remain in isolation from his/her other parent would be difficult if not impossible. Overall, this story was well presented and very enjoyable.

First, I spent 2 years there during my first tour in the early to mid '90s. Yeah, it's not that great a place.

Second, Panama has an extradition treaty with the US, and Steve would have been detained and extradited in no time flat once they found him.

4 Stars, but the use of Panama as an escape location cost 1.

She fell for her bosses school boy charm? Huh? Come again? She was a social climbing whore looking to trade up. The unlikely part was that he would be seen with her, let alone fuck her. She wasn't worth the risk to his reputation and could have been fucking another model quality bimbo. Too bad we all learn too late who we really married. Some of us are lucky, some of us are not so lucky!

Judy My first wife was fucking on me, I was too dunb and trusting to believe the fucking . signs. One night I ate a box full of come, spit it out and went back to fucking her. Then my neighbor started giving me numorius hints. My dumb ass started to finally get it. My best friend was fucking her while I was at work. Once her dad asked how good a piece of ass I thought she was, Did I think she was well broken in?

She once asked me if I would fuck any of our daughters if we ever had any. Within 90 days we were in divorce court and I was screwing married a woman from work that said her husband took her for granite, what ever that ment. Then she told me about a really hot girl that had a crush on me she was jealious and warned me stay away from Connie. I moved on after I found out her husband was really a great guy and family man that really loved his wife and kids.

Connie and I moved into together into a high end club apartment. She was always ready to fuck, but she would make up the most fantastic drama stories. I moved out after ninety days. For the next 2 years I fucked any and every one I could, half of them married, including my still best friends wife. I asked to get him to eat her cunt full of my cum, the sick son of a bitch liked it, so much for revenge. She admited screwing around but never told him with who. She knew he had been fucking Judy.

Then one day in the last few days of summer my neighbor girl threw her pussy into my face, I was hooked. We have been married 51 years next february. I caught her fucking a friend and kept quiet about it. I simply fucked her raw and never let her know I saw them..

One day she told me one of our kids was fatherd by my younger brother, I told her to stop talking I did not want to know the details or which one as I love all three of my girls and that is it. And never to let on to the girls, she agreed

I used to drink heavy. get sloppy drunk and get laid. I never admited it except for one My wife to this day does not believe I did it .

Her comments at the charity auction were red flags, and frankly, I would have rubbed her face in the crusty panties, then had a DNA test done on them.

like a cutting accent, bad grammar / spelling can ruin a story. Simply ..the ones below jumped at me without any effort on my behalf. Not your usual self. Used a new / no editor this time I would guess.

Bored a plane... really!!

so hard; - why the semi colon

So why's he screwing around with my wife, probably because he can..... there was a good place for a semi colon.. not a comma

so much over time... (overtime)

she tried to reasoned with me..(tried to reason or she reasoned)

"How long have you know?" she finally asked....(known)

Danny missed his Mother and called her. The FBI contacted The State Dept and he and Danny were returned to the states. He was in handcuffs. All his funds were impounded and one month later he was spending 18 years to life in a Federal Prison and she had her son and all his money. This wasn't even a good fantasy. He was the real bad guy in this.

He was a little kid, probably thought her name was mom. How do you look that up in the phone book? Oh yeah, he was too young to know how to read. Why would the law try to get him extradited? He was in Panama. Do you think that we have an extradition treaty with them? Besides, he knew the babysitter and his grandparents better than he knew his mom. She was always out getting stuffed. And just for shits and giggles let me ask. Why do you think he would be better off with his mother, you man hating bitch?

In order to be an effective editor, one must also be literate. Please!

Your comments are some of the funniest I've read on this site. I hope to God you weren't trying to be serious, because that would just be pathetic.

and Viva Mexico for a new start. TK U MLJ LV NV

How do you fall UNDER charm? You fall under a spell. And his 'schoolboy charm'? Schoolboys do it for her, huh?

Re: Kidnapping. A parent cannot kidnap their own child, unless they don't have legal custody, which EVERY parent has, while still married to the other parent. If they were divorced before he left, and she won custody, THEN it would be kidnapping. Just as any divorced parent that has full custody, can legally leave the state, or country, forever, and the other parent can do nothing. I know a guy whose ex wife's new husband got a job offer 3000 miles away, so they moved, leaving the guy with no recourse, and he only gets to see his son via Skype. As his lawyer told him, she has full custody, so she can legally go where she pleases. To say he is bitter, would be an understatement.

For all the reasons javmor79 hated it. What an ass! How could anyone be stupid enough to believe a self-centered cheating slut wouldn't be a damaging influence on her children? Well, dumb asses aside, this was a breath of fresh air. So nice to read about a real man taking care of business.

You are a good writer, and I enjoy most of your stories, but I take issue with you on two aspects of your story. One is the fact that, if anything, he's worse and more selfish than she is. Yes, she's screwing another guy. That's bad and a terrible affront to him. So, she's betrayed you, divorce her and seek custody. Instead, he moves to Panama, exposes his son to a living situation that's not anything like tha quality of almost anywhere in the U.S., and also deprives his parents of not only his company, but the joys of being with their grandchild. Also, even if Panama doesn't have an extradition treaty with the U.S., if you think that pressure wouldn't be brought to return him and the child to the U.S. after he entered Panama illegally under an assumed name and on an illegal passport after a theft like this, you'd have to be dreaming.

....would have been to funnel a small amount of his cheating wife's money and her lover's money to a terrorist bank account. That way, she would be facing years in a Federal prison, he would be granted full custody, and his cheating slut wife would probably pick up a few new diseases in prison. Of course, as an accomplice to terrorists, lover boy would spend his time down at Club Gitmo, learning how much those radicals make love to a pretty white boy when the lights go out.......

Most guys fantasize about screwing some beautiful girl. But you moronic BTB guys dream about getting and then doing unrealistically stupid things to others. Amazing.

But a couple of obvious flaws. He never would have been able to get a passport for his son without Sandy's signature. So the kid wasn't leaving the Country on a plane. The authorities would have been watching his parents closely. If his partner could find him you don't think others could? After all he's a kidnapper. And most small kids that age would have tried to call Mom. Steve would have never made it out of the country with his son and if he had, he would have been back in prison in less than 6 weeks. Bad story telling. Poorly thought out. Nice fantasy though.

Why are all these wives, who LOVE their husbands, unable to resist the "charm" o these predators who seem to have nothing better to do than steal other men's wives, who, more often than not, aren't even as attractive as the predator's own wife?

I think you must be bastard D Wornoutcocks' brother. He too is an authority unto himself on all things legal. Got some news for you Professor...passports for all three of my kids did not require my wife's signature. Just mine and their birth certificates, pictures and the requisite dollars. Must have worked, we're still traveling. The wife BTW had remarried several months before we needed to travel and applied for passports. Want to explain that counsellor?

he said in the begining of the story he had a fake passport. Then a bit later he said he had several fakes. You don think someone who can get several fake passports couldnt get one also for his son? WTF you must be stupid. And besides it is a fictional story dont take it so seriously.

Why do spouses ( both husbands and wives) cheat on their spouses? Is the thrill that thrilling? Can't be or why do they regret it after getting caught. Only the cheaters will know these answers

Meh

If they did not have a child, I would be saying well done.

But, they had a son, so he turned from hero to douchebag the moment he stole the son.

You want to divorce a cheating cunt, fine. But, you don't destroy his mother.

Yeah it sucks that she would probably have custody, the house, etc, but that is the price you pay for bad choices, like marrying a cheating cunt (even when you don't know she was going to turn into one).

You make sure you stay close and visit the son every chance you can.

On the plus side, you did not have the father abandoning his son while destroying the wife and son like that lowlife scumbag piece of shit huedogg does.

The story was a solid good read. I will give it a 5 Star. But in reality the child paid the price by being taken from his mom. Was she a no good cheating scum bucket of a wife? Yes, but she didn't do drugs, nor directly abuse her child, she didn't murder anyone. Made a mistake? You bet yah! Nothing in the story showed she was an unfit mother just a wife who made a "big" mistake. We or most of us either forgive and/or move on. But in my line of work I see a lot of men take children away from mom's because; "you done me wrong and you are going to pay". The true payee is the child/children. Oh well it was just a story well written but from a male's point of view. I can always tell. At least he wasn't a "brave" man and beat the hell out of her.

We must do something to end their fictional suffering! We must march on Washington to make this fictional blight end!

bleh I've seen too many kids end up over medicated and brainwashed by 'good' mothers that 'only cheated' to even consider marking this story down for that.

you spend so much time finding ways to get a supposed revenge that hurts lots of people including, in the end a son. If all the crap this character did was done in real time he would be caught and in jail. Love these stories of revenge where the revenge makes the character worse than the original sinner.

This was an excellent story and well written. I read Hansbwl's comment "Stupidity". Well he is totally wrong. I read a number of his stories some of which he doesn't even finish the dam story. The 3 stories that I read were poorly written. The plots were terrible. In one the husband is shown a picture of his wife's pussy being enter by another man's penis. So he leaves her due to her cheating. His wife is a lawyer so she shows a picture of her pussy to the judge during their divorce trial to prove that her pussy isn't the one in the picture. When the husband understands that his wife didn't cheat, the wife still wants the divorce because the husband should have believed in her innocence. This is really stupid writing. Also the story states that she gets a warrant to enter someone else's house based on heresay evidence. Hansbwl should just give up writing!

Man enough.

The cheating twat got exactly what she deserved!

So did the asshole boss,who lost it all,including a wife who had to be a hell of a loy better than Sandy. His ego nailed that asshole!

as for taking the son away., why leave her any access? so she gets custody and support . if able id do it too, the courts fuck men over all the time. 5

You have no clue how many errors you don't see, mostly because you don't know correct grammar or spelling. "I want to thank Wolf Vixen for her help in catching the error I never seem to see. I could of made a two-chapter story out of this but I wanted to cut it off cleanly, so tell me what you think."

You wrote that 'I could "of" made' ??? WTF? Do you have any idea why that's wrong? Could of? Really?

A rather simplistic stupid story, written and told in a schoolboy fashion and totally unbelievable.

GREAT story.......,,,,,,,!!!!!!!!!******* BTB.

The description of "hacking" done is so stupid that it seems the author has no clue about technical aspect of his story. Little research is really needed here to make it believable.

How does he know where she is after five years.?How can he get married if he isn't divorced?.If she is as good looking as he says ,how come she hasn't got married again?.

This is typical of slirpuff. He makes all sorts of unbelievable and impossible details because he is so focused on BTB ending. I am not against BTB stories and endings, as a matter of fact I read that stuff, but one needs to be just a bit more realistic in the plot development and that requires thinking. I don't think slirpuff has enough patience or creativity for that.

Character development is also lacking, the female character is just a complete moronic female but then again this is a typical cliche of BTB stories.

The high grades these stories get just illustrates the large number of depressed and lonely male readers on LE.

Count me in, as I love this story. Slirpuff is one of the absolute best writers in LW. The BTB story is the only antidote to the sick cheating and cuckold stories contaminating the site. As the cucks like to say, "If you don't like the BTB story, don't read it."

she could a reached inside and stuck it out, TK U MLJ LV NV

Because dreaming about life being as easy as this story relaxes me and allows me to feel better about Real Life were this revenge could never happened.

Seems he's not afraid Richard would use some money to hunt him down.. Especially since he's doing the same work he did before he shouldn't be to hard to find. The FBI would habe gotten involved, 1.2 million gets attention, and would have been able to trace it. The FBI never forgets about these crimes and never completely stops looking either.

No way Kenny or his old company would hire him, that would be aiding and abetting a criminal. When it came out they knowingly hired him , and it would come out someday, they would be financially ruined and some people probably put in prison. What company, especially banks, would want a company that condones this kind of behavior?

His parents would have been grilled and probably threatened with jail time if they didn't roll on him. Sandy must have some idea where he is since he wrote to "come down here to see Danny". Down here would have only meant south America/ Mexico area and the story kind of implies he told her exactly where he was to see Danny.

But hey, the story was cute, if only wishful thinking.

5*****

I like BTB stories a lot but they have to contain some modicum of believable actions. This one is not close.

Even tho I can see thru the money handling bs. Any way it makes for a fun story.

He needed a beating as well

I wonder if He got Checked for STDs ?? One of My Friends Wife Gave him something Extra .. He was able to get it taken care of .. But He could not have Sex for 3 Months .. The highlight was telling the doctor who gave him the STD .. The Doctor was her Doctor since Childhood ..

He would have moved the money via Bitcoin at one point so the FBI would never have found it! That is what the purpose of Bitcoin. It totally stops anyone from following the money. It’s sole purpose is illegal transactions. That is we must stop the use of Bitcoin currency.

Have you ever given a positive comment without some kind of snide barbs? Signed: BTW

He plans on marrying again,but I don't see anywhere in the story that he got divorced.

Not bad. Decent story and mostly well written. Thanks for the good read.

A great BTB from slurping. A really good one.