by lilywhite31
Nice storyline, but you should have spent more time developing the story.
Hot very hot. But, I would have loved a longer interlude during their first encounter.
Short, sweet! What a lovely story.... Wish you could write more about these two....
I have read most of your stories. I feel you must have loved your daddy as his lover. I have 3 daus and one of them is my lover. I hope you continue to write and I will be looking for more of your stories and hoping they are your life experiences you are writing about.