All Comments on 'The Truth'

by lilywhite31

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LutherTLutherTabout 18 years ago
A little too quick...

Nice storyline, but you should have spent more time developing the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
nice idea

i like the idea of the story but was a little quick,

oldwayneoldwaynealmost 15 years ago
It was fun...

while it lasted. Thanks for a nice little fantasy.

NME17NME17almost 13 years ago
crappy ending

whats with the ending? ran out of time?

HornyViginAngelHornyViginAngelover 10 years ago
Nice.

Hot very hot. But, I would have loved a longer interlude during their first encounter.

Azygous1964Azygous1964almost 9 years ago
Beautiful

Short, sweet! What a lovely story.... Wish you could write more about these two....

darrellprestondarrellprestonabout 7 years ago
family love

I have read most of your stories. I feel you must have loved your daddy as his lover. I have 3 daus and one of them is my lover. I hope you continue to write and I will be looking for more of your stories and hoping they are your life experiences you are writing about.

auSolitude1964auSolitude1964over 5 years ago
So sweet

Love all your stories... well-written and passionate!

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