All Comments on 'The Tube'

I was totally there on the train, it was me!

Really enjoyed the story and thought you wrote the woman's part well.

Keep up the good work!

Ms.Flibble

that was well written and very erotic up to cleaning off the ick..that always gets to me..yuck.

reading one of your stories. Great little fantasy and as usual, the writing is stellar. Thanks! Can't wait to read more of your stuff. Keep it coming.

Its...uncomfortable to think of somebody's dick in your ass then inside your mouth don't you agree? Maybe switch the order next time?

if you've never tried it, it's not nearly how you think of it.

I agree about the order, just plain not healthy :)

I can tell by reading your writing that you're better than this. You have the potential to create characters that people could fall in love with. The kind that a reader could easily become obsessed with. The talent is there. This particular story wasn't really a story, and the characters were... unsatisfying. The male character could have been intimidating, dark, brooding... he could have been a million things, but you gave him dialogue that made him seem like a trailer park resident. You're a good writer... there just wasn't anything about this that was memorable.