All Comments on 'The Unmentionable'

I really love this story, but couldn't you describe her panties? Here, I'll help you out on this one. "Hot pink, silky, thong."

As most human and perhaps more have crossed this incredible powerful experience and few of us realize just how central it is to each of us and all of us....

Thank you for sharing

I really liked this short story. "The Unmentionable" isn't "The Unpardonable." And its passion, its purity and its drive matches the tone of the Song of Solomon.

I re-read your biographic statement. I had to, given your choice of nom-de-plume. I was expecting a citation of or quote from St. Paul's epistle to the Philippians. That wouldn't be consistent with the two closing paragraphs of your story BUT I would insist that there in nothing inconsistent between you work and the catalogue of admirable things found in Philippians 4:8:

"And now, dear brothers and sisters, one final thing. Fix your thoughts on what is true, and honorable, and right, and pure, and lovely, and admirable. Think about things that are excellent and worthy of praise."

What did G-d create that is more wonderful?