All Comments on 'The Vampire Alastair'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I'm sure it's good...

But it could be great! You just need to remove the run-on sentences. Please...

SweetNess444SweetNess444over 13 years ago
: )

I like it so far. When I first started reading it I was like 'Interview With The Vampire' alert! But it turned out totally different and I liked it. A lot. Cant wait to read the next chapter :)

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