All Comments on 'The Vassal Academy Ch. 10'

too long

write more, much more

I want to keep reading, I am waiting for the next chapter. Please write more, the longer the better.

Unlike a previous comment, your real readers value HIGHLY the care you have taken with characters and their progress,

the settings and plot actions. There are only a few minor

errors and so many many positive aspects to your Academy that some of us would wish that it was real! I'm looking forward to further chapters and more answers as we see the

clients coming in and more training accomplished.

All us vassals of your story are begging for more. Fabulous!

I absolutely loved Thomas's inspection of Diane in this chapter! I love your work, glad to know theres another person like me in savannah.

Enjoyed it, thanks!

Whilst I can clearly see the benefits of orgasm control there’s a lot to be said for the unstoppable orgasm that when it hits it totally rocks your world.

Love the author’s sense of humour and irony, ex sex slaves training consenting adults to become slaves. I expect there probably is a good market for a bdsm finishing school (puns intended), the one in the story would need to adapt to cover those who are and want to be submissives as opposed to seeking to turn all candidates into slaves.

TPE isn’t my thing I’m not cut out for 24/7 D/s and whilst safewords are discussed and stated as available if the House Slaves safeword then not only are they out of the immediate scene but out of a job and a home. That opens the risk that they won’t safe word if that need arises. Even the best Doms/ Masters etc (or f variation) can make mistakes or loose control for all that they strive to be omnipotent and omniscient it’s just not humanly possible all of the time. I fully agree that the best dominants are those who’ve experienced what their sub is experiencing. So what can appear to work in a story only does so because it’s a story and not reality.