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by Anitole

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Liked your story-liked the twist.

I thought it was very good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Disappointing

It seemed that you were pressing to have something posted and made some basic mistakes in grammar and punctuation. Slow down and you'll get back to that level you normally write at.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I want to cry this was beautiful.

adegeromeadegeromeabout 2 years ago

How very beautiful. You're gifted with with a sensitivity to the feelings of the other.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Your sensitivity is astonishing. This a tender, well told story.

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If you wish to find me on Twitter: @AnitoleJ I also have a few of my stories independently published on Amazon. My first novel Coyote: A Pansexual Erotica was published in the late summer of 2021. I am planning a second novel by the end of 2021 along with a few shorter p...