All Comments on 'The Waiting Room Ch. 02'

A clever continuation of chapter 1 in your unique style. You make me ache for chapter 3.

I love the understated eroticism.

I found myself wondering if Malcolm had deliberately searched for 'John' and set up the meeting, hoping for just the result 'John' provided. After all, if things are not satisfactory as they are - SOMEONE has to take the initiative to change them. I think the coincidence of it being the same man is too big for it to be just 'luck'. Maybe as Elizabeth and Malcolm discuss their options, he might 'confess' to having deliberately searched for her 'John' to complete both of their fantasies. Who knows? Only MaryR does. The offer of a third chapter is indeed a tantalising thought. Once again, well done, a most enjoyable story.

The suggestion of things to come is always there. I felt permanently hard.

The change in names was so easily carried out with the complete change in personalities.

Well done to the author. More please.

I liked the concern Wendy and Mr. Rodgers showed for Malcolm's comfort.

Malcolm will be so ready for part 3 and Wendy's follow-up.

This was a very clever piece of erotic writing. I really loved the re enactment of events of twenty years previous. What I wonder is did Malcolm secretly plan this? Did Robert? or perhaps Malcolm and Robert colluded? In any event, what really stood out for me was the artful way the author was able to switch names and because it was so easy to keep up there was no confusion. It is a skill in itself to do that and the author must be commended. I do hope there is more on the way. Keep Writing!

My kind of story. Lots of detail, so you can get to know the mind set of the characters. And then when action starts, you feel part of the event.

It was so nice that Wendy and Robert were able to consummate their mutual desire all those years after their Brief Encounter. Very nice, well written erotica. I will look forward to reading another chapter.

Mmmm... What a lovely follow-up. Could there be a third part?

Well done Mary, I love all your stories and this one is a superb follow up.

Sexy, erotic, well written.

Great follow up Mary. Give us more

Another great story Mary, hope there will be more.

Chapter two was really sexy; Wendy's desire was palpable as was Malcolm's excitement. Overall a great story. Please treat us to Chapter 3

A great extension of chapter one and I think a third chapter should be written.

Continue (Ch 3)? Yes; by all means. MaryR, Thank you for such an enticing read.

Another excellent chapter with plenty of scope to continue. Well done!!!

Even better than chapter one leading to the inevitable climatic conclusion. Brilliant!

So looking forward to The Waiting Room, part 3. an excellent read and so erotic.

Oh Yes I can see it now. The

couple are in Johns office and

he suggests that Malcolm does

his thing with Wendy's bra and

panties and how well that worked

as John once again took care of

Wendy, just an idea. A story to be

read many times.

Thanks Mary!

oh yes more please Ma'am

Thanks for directing me to your stories. Love the Waiting Room series. Great concept, well written, fun as well as erotic. Hope you continue to enjoy my stories as well.

I loved this story - so illicit on the one hand and so innocent on the other.

The descriptions took me right into the story, as if I was next to Elizabeth.....watching her every move.

Please - write Part 4.

I thought chapter 1 was fantastic and this is even better. Easily one of the best stories involving wife watching that I have ever read.

Really unique approach to your story. I love the multiple directions you have left for the Wendy and John part of the story. I'm intrigued and excited, actually, to see where you take Malcolm on his journey. What will he be willing to do and have done to him?

Mary I love your writing but you knew that already please write a chapter 3 so I can read it and be a naughty boy and get myself off again

A wonderful tale of erotica. Beautifully written and sexually arousing.

Totally unrealistic, though. Meh.