All Comments on 'The Walk Home Ch. 01'

May we suggest writing your next submission, from practical experience, without any clothing on?

Gracious me! Assuming co-writers are both foreign nationals, expressing erotic situations, with English language colloquial spellings such as 'site' for 'sight', removed much meaning of writer's intentions! This reader would volunteer to accompany 'stark naked' writers, whilst nuances of correct English language were explained in greater detail, to enhance a practical understanding of professional eroticism! -With humiliation of 'stark naked' lessons, preferably in public places, both these writers should benefit? A truly 'Long Walk Home', flashing 'in the bollicky-buff' would be certain to improve your English writing, as Literotica readers might be expecting?

The purpose of these stories is to titulate the readers, not to educate them! In that case, I think the two authors did a great job. Right on,guys...write on!!

YOMEYO