All Comments on 'The Warehouse'

by TheArcticFox

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Very nice!

I really enjoyed this one - it was so hot and steamy - thank you. Five stars.

PiodenPiodenabout 12 years ago
Marvellous!

Really enjoyed this - 99% better than anything else I've read recently. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

From the early part of the story it’s obvious that the couple aren’t in a D/s relevant, there’s a massive difference between an established D/s dynamic and a vanilla relationship where the couple have experimented a couple of times.

This would have been highly erotic IF they were clearly a D/s couple, as it stands she’s in way over her head and it makes him seem psychotic.

Tess (uk)

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