by TheArcticFox
I really enjoyed this one - it was so hot and steamy - thank you. Five stars.
Really enjoyed this - 99% better than anything else I've read recently. Keep up the good work!
From the early part of the story it’s obvious that the couple aren’t in a D/s relevant, there’s a massive difference between an established D/s dynamic and a vanilla relationship where the couple have experimented a couple of times.
This would have been highly erotic IF they were clearly a D/s couple, as it stands she’s in way over her head and it makes him seem psychotic.
Tess (uk)