All Comments on 'The Warehouse Girl Ch. 02'

Just finished chapters 1&2. Highly erotic-yeah! But the twist at the end of chapter 2 held my interest just as much as the two women and the man playing their little games together leading up to it. Both stories taken together, and they really have to be read that, provide a sexy little tale in a much different way and drama or suspense or both at the end. Damn fine read in my opinon.

I loved Chapter 1. LOVED IT!!!!

But about half way through Ch. 2, I lost interest.

You wrote: "In seconds Judy’s salad was covered in cum an inch thick."

Give me a fuckin' break. Even Peter North couldn't cum that much.

And if you end a story like you did, put it in the "erotic horror" section.