by TooCleverByHalf
I was surprised to see Sam to come back into the story since he had supposedly severed all ties with his family. I thought there would be at least a few more bread crumbs before the story lead back to the Harringtons and their revenge for their poor, poor dead daughter.
I love the story so far. I think it will definitely become one of my all time favorites.
i think they should stay a group even if rommie and cassie split off to be a seperate but equal part
Oh, thank goodness. I was worried that things were coming to a close, with the business plan falling into place and the four of them inevitably sharing one another. Coming to a close would mean leaving this rich, textured world you've created, and I'm not prepared to do that.
So, hi to Sam ex Machina. Please provide us with a few hundred more opportunities to enjoy this story.
Or, in short, this was spectacular, and hurray that more's a-comin'!
And I am VERY annoyed right now.
This chapter continues the great story. The mixture of story and sex is extremely well done. And as for the plot twist ending....grrrrrrrrrr
To say a job well done is an understatement.
Thank you for sharing
I satyed up all night reading your story after I stumbled across it. I think you've done a great job blending sex with intelligence. The characters are able to have real conversations and still have the hottest sex. Your style kind of reminds me of another story I read "Side Bet Bluff"
Can't wait for the next chapter!
PS: I REALLY hope Mike picks Jenny!