All Comments on 'The Warrior Ch. 04'

Ah yes, picking up nicely, now.

Like it!

Lukas

Just wanted to let you know that this story series is one of my favorites on this site and I check for updates often. Great work! I look forward to future chapters (and hope that they come soon).

OMG that makes me wanna cream!!!

A well written tale. Very sexy! looking forward to reading more of your work, especially this story.

Has the talent, has the hunger, has the skill This young person will be a featured author on the best sellers list in a few years! You can make book on it!

Read the whole story it's great...Sweet, passionate, adventurous...I want more!!! Will the war end? Do they actually marry? Kids? Vanquish the invaders? Will he return to the other side of the Gate? Doesn't matter if those questions are answered or not it's still a GREAT STORY!!!!!!!

Once again your story excels! Need I say more?

I love it so far I hope you finish it soon..

I just ran across this story today and to tell you the truth, it's the first one I've ever read on this site that actually (I feel) is worth reading. Seeing as the biggest genre out there right now is the Paranormal Romance genre, I have to say... get thee to a RWA (Romance Writers of America) meeting and work on getting this baby published while the embers of the genre are hot. Seriously good stuff and I am horribly dissapointed to see that there is no ending to the series, though I really hope you intend the ending to be happy, so maybe if not it's good that it doesn't end. But regardless, I would seriously consider working on this with an eye toward publication. It would at least be worth a shot, especially since most RWA chapters allow you to attend several meetings without having to have membership. If you do get it published, you'll have to let us know though so we can rush out and buy it.

I've just finish reading both your multi chapter stories and all i can say is there great! Please keep writing these wonderful stories. They are so addicting and full of enchanting characters that I'm just dying to know more about

you're going to finish this one too! Way too good to be left hanging for 3 years. I know you have an outside life, but please! Put us out of our misery!

Smart, lusty, lovely, inspiring. Perfect.

The sex was a bit rushed and not with sufficent finesse, what happened to the foreplay?