All Comments on 'The Warrior's Heart Ch. 01'

I couldn't do anything but become invested in these two characters...I so have to read this whole story tonight. smh. I'm going to be a little sleepy at work, but I'm sure I'll love it. LOL

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you .

Great beginning. Good character study. Look forward to more. Thanks

Like how this started, and looking forward to reading more :)

i really liked how you wrote this first chapter, it completely pulled me in and kept me. i hope you keep it up because this was very good so far.

has the makings to be a great tale i am looking forward to reading more

i can see several ways this could go, all seem interesting, hope to see more soon

That was a really fun read and it moved at a nice pace. I'm interested to see what the crushers really are and what your heros will do with them! Please write more DW