All Comments on 'The Watcher Ch. 03'

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Anonymousover 9 years ago

The Pacing

This is just brilliant. Polished and brilliant.

SweetGasps about 11 years ago

What are they???

The last 2 pages were creepy as heck!! As I was reading I heard a noise outside which cause me to jump! What a sissy I am.

I've been following this story and I like it. It is one suspense after another. The drop off at the end has left me in anticipation!! Please hurry with the next chapter!!

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"If you walk about the city long enough, you might glimpse a man, a cloaked man who strays from the typical path. You might fancy him an illusion or a trick of the eye. But whatever his form, he's there. Were you close enough to discern, you'd find that he is without a face. E...

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