All Comments on 'The Waterfall'

by KitKatKaboom

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glenbrown69glenbrown69almost 12 years ago
Pretty Good for a first try

This is a lot better than some of the first submissions I've seen uploaded.

I've also sent you some private feedback, check your inbox.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Enjoy being naked

This what being a nudist is about.

THANK YOU

NellaBarely2NellaBarely2almost 12 years ago
A dangerous thing - the Mind

You crafted a very real situation many have been trapped in, with a most pleasing road to the Waterfall. Isn't it interesting that one time you close your eyes and the brain believes it knows a threat is near. Other times it open a new door and is willing to believe hope is at hand. I appreciate your tale of how having good friends can help us all recover from anything. Great story line. Have a good life beginning with your Waterfall.

humminbeanhumminbeanalmost 12 years ago
Maybe more common than you think

I've heard similar stories, in real life. Skin is a recording medium, it carries your life story in it - sad chapters as well as happy ones. Whatever the story, you're entitled to wear it, and people who love you accept all of it.

Brava!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
sweetness

very sweet opening of a flower; had a similar situation some time ago..very sweet

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