All Comments on 'The Water's Fine'

by petemgurk

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
That was fun.

Everybody had some forbidden sex and ended up (I presume) happy.

EveAnnaEveAnnaover 16 years ago
A good read

I thought your story was well written, although I lost count of the many different words you used for pussy and cock - but the story kept my interest and I loved the ending.

don87654don87654over 16 years ago
Great. and very natural

We need a continuation on this one. Maybe they can fuck again and start a baby, this time in her womb.

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