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luvinoral2luvinoral2almost 16 years ago
off to a great start

has a good base to continue on with. Seemed a lil rushed at the beginning, but finished quite nicely. looking forward to the continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good so far...

I liked the story here. I look forward to reading the next chapter and the ones after it...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Hot Stuff!

Great story. I can't believe you stopped there. I feel I've been jipped! Write some more and please include a little anal for crying out loud.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
These ANAL jerks slay me

What is so EROTIC about emptying you cock is a stinking messy hole full of shit?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good but

good but you only get a 50% because you never finished it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

please make a sequal that was a great story hope to see a sequal

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
MORE

maybe the caller could turn out to be thier mom and maybe he could get the sister pregnant

reader018reader018over 12 years ago
would like to see more!

Great start,would love to read a second part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Tony T. the cheater

Tony Tangaro sharts the bed and cheats on his girlfriend of 9 years with some loser Keli from WOW by sending inappropriate pictures of himself. The end

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