All Comments on 'The Widower and Mandy'

Please write one....

Always, E

Please write on....

Always, E

I'm a guy and I DON'T enjoy reading them. And I ain't a queer, either!

That didn't help your story did it - dulled strong effort for what purpose? To show the bastard your character is? Why tarnish him and you for no real purpose. Show and gain some respect - it is not a bad thing. Otherwise a strong effort with talented flow.

Chris was faithful until wife died, was supported by all their friends (including Paul & Mandy, i assume) thru wife's illness and the mourning - so why does the author change Chris into a preditory sex fiend who goes after the wives of his friends (2nd time now) and puts their marraiges in jeopardy?

i mean it seems viscious and out of character to go from a faithful loving goodguy of a boss, husband & father to a creepy MILF predator of his friend's wives.

if there is a cause for that change, Style Guy, you really should make a chapter explaining it soon. whether it is a brain tumor, alien mind control, his wife's deathbed confession of unfaithfulness, or some other old wrong like the HS rape of an old girlfrind - so why is a guy like him doing this?

Woman here! love to read about sluts lik eme being made to fuck Big Black dick. Keep up the good work!! Make that slut take that nbig dick in her tight asshole.

analgirl

...taking charge, getting their desires met, pleasuring "their" women, and fucking them however they want. I like the perceptiveness and psychological control of the dominants in your stories. Keep the hot stories coming. Longer stories are fine, too.

Yeah, gals like being dominated, at least I do. My husband and I trade off though. MEN like to have someone else in control occasionally too. Maybe Chris should find a woman that leaves him begging for more. I'd like to see a little more emotion from him though. Sex is great but isn't he lonely? Maybe he is doing the whole thing because the last thing he wants is to be vulnerable to feeling loss again? Write another installment, I'd love to see you round out his character more.

that said,men are head of the household and lead.this leadership come in a form where women have equal say so.in bed that another story.

Mandy was hot-good sex scenes, well-written thanks

Has he worn 2 inches off his dick in two stories?

In the first chapter he was 10 inches, now he's lost 2!

Maybe she bit two inches off, and he doesn't know it yet. Hell of a note. If he keeps that up he won't have any dick left. lol Really, what makes authors think giving their characters ten inch dicks is erotic, that's like giving huge tits to a skinny girl. Make your character realistic authors, don't make a fool out of yourself. You can write erotic stories with normal people, they don't all have to be studs and goddesses. More realism makes for better reading.

Not comparable with your latest work at all.

Even worse than the first chapter.

Two inches shorter in this story...

is still an asshole.

How come he went from ten inches shagging Cassie to eight inches shagging Mandy?.

I'm like the other readers. Why did his cock get 2 inches smaller

I like ker63469 says why has his cock shrunk 2 inches?

So he was an asshole all along. Maybe he managed to keep himself together during his marriage, but after his wife died his real character came through. Mandy was not a slut, she wasn't fucking some asshole. She was only masturbating, which everybody has a right to do. If he was a gentleman and a true friend, the moment he found himself looking at her deed, he should have quietly backed away. Instead he took advantage of a weak sub woman. Even though he knew she was married. How big an asshole can one become!!!