All Comments on 'The Window Cleaner'

This is an extremly erotic wonderful story! It certainly raised my er interest!

Great work!

It raised more than my interest, as the last comment said.

It was short enough, sexy enough, and rousing.

Lorraine, you've written a fine, short, to-the-point story. I really understand and appreciate the sense of shared arousal.

I love it - colourful and rhythmic

Loved your Window Cleaner story. Perfect set up and well described without to MUCH description. I don't like it when writers go on and on describing the same thing. Well done. Flashback1953 at ya who dot com

Alan Croft is a Belfast born deep sea scaffolder who moved to London to learn the English language and make his fortune by selling surgical wrestling boots to under privileged Mongolian immigrants. But the only job he could get was wringing out chamois’s for a one armed window cleaner. His love affair with England ended when he was given the cold shoulder by the Queen who had made tea and toast during renovation work at Windsor castle. Disillusioned following an unsuccessful 13 years of trying to teach the people of Reading, Berkshire to speak with a Belfast accent he packed up his digital alarm clock radio and headed to Canada. He now resides in Toronto and is president of the “Oy watch it club.” He is now looking for a new publisher or assistance to promote his book. Newbooks1@outlook.com Thank you http://www.amazon.co.uk/Belfast-Laughter-1957-1977-Alan-Croft/dp/1634134095