All Comments on 'The Wolf and The Phoenix Ch. 02'

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canndcanndabout 13 years ago

I really like the story so far. I loved how he was assumed to be the phoenix. They worked together so well. I don't understand why they only have each other. Can't he present her as a good choice as an assassin? I know he shouldn't have taken her into their safe house when she isn't part of the brotherhood but if he explains she helped take out the magistrate, say they killed the phoenix and 3 knights, how could they be upset that he chose to help her back? look forward to more.

SeshoSeshoabout 13 years agoAuthor

Appreciate your feed back ^.^ It's one of the routes I was considering, but I don't plan things in advance so I'm figuring out the story just slightly ahead of you guys, the readers, lol.

SeshoSeshoover 12 years agoAuthor
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