All Comments on 'The Woman-King Ch. 01'

A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

gotta love female power...

Not normally into science fiction and fantasy but will read the next chapter and see where it goes.

Ooohhh!

I thoroughly enjoyed the way you described secretly desiring another woman and having it come to fruition.

Even without the actual coming together (no pun intended) physically in this part of the story, the buildup was very erotic.

Please, please keep up the excellent wtiting...

v/r,

Beth in California

This seemed so wonderfully real.<br><br>

As for the anonymous poster who complained about the category - did the description ("a woman **she ** wants") not clue you in?

You like your life, don't be ashamed there are a large number of lesbian stories on this site and even more on Asstr.org and Nifty. Label your stories for what they are.

wow that was so good, i hope there is more to come.