by firstkiss
Good writing,
I almost skipped over this story because it was identified as SciFI.
This was such a sensuous story to read, your building of the characters and their friendship made it easy to imagine the intensity of their pleasure.
Your mix of strength with a sensuous feminine touch made this a truly excellent erotic story.
Thanks for a breath of fresh air in your story approach.
However, I'd so love to see you write another variation set in modern times. :-)
v/r
Beth in California
...Brenis-Lir has a cousin...heh heh heh...and she is not a nice lady.
Because it’s in the wrong category.
It’s not Sci-Fi & Fantasy primarily—it’s Lesbian.
I feel tricked.
I fully read the stories because I love your other stories, especially: Not Your Type Series.
And your a fellow 🇨🇦 Yeah!
I couldn’t really get into it because it’s not a story I’d typically read.
Plus there wasn’t a love story that would have at least levelled the story so I could also appreciate it.
Please reconsider your categories in the future, if I’m so fortunate to read another.