All Comments on 'The World's Second Best Wizard Ch. 01'

I liked this story a bunch! I was hoping the effects of the potions would be permanent though, lol! Looking forward to more either way!

funy and hot

A work of genius. I can already see a market for this potion.

And we don’t know what it does to MEN.

10/10!

- Liked how the potion effects were drawn out of a resisting Finduir like coaxing a fire

- Erotic scenes

- liked the transformation element

please write more

I really like this story, the set up and characters are good so far, and you got more than a few laughs out of me. Too bad it's been a few years since this chapter was posted without a second, so while I do hope to see more, I won't count on it.