All Comments on 'The Wrong Third'

i like the twist that the "hooker" was the daughter!! can't wait for part 2!

She'd forget what her daughter looked like in just two years? Really?

it made me laugh..lol...porn does not always have to be so serious

OMG!!!!! Now there is the way to do a threesome!! Oh hell yes, with the daughter!! Give me one of each!!!!!

More chapters please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maybe it's best not to. Start fresh with another story. This one had such promise and was pretty exciting up until the end, which was terribly disappointing. A twist ending that we'd already considered and dismissed, like a bad M. Night Shyamalan movie; improbabilities of behavior (why didn't Doug wait? wasn't he interested in a threesome? did he think the hired girl would be paid for and gone by the time Cindy was out of the shower? how did Kelly get into the room without Doug and the hired girl noticing?). Too unlikely, but so well written.

keep up the good work

Don't you dare stop! You've got us hooked... in a manner of speaking! Thanks for the great start.

I love your work, this one is fabulous and your descriptive play is so HOT. Makes me wish I lived in Alaska instead of Florida.

Great start to the story! What do you have next?

I found this story very erotic (5 stars) but the ending after her orgasm disappointing so i gave 3 stars.

Just not believable.

This is too good with so many directions that it must be finished. I gave it 5 stars and hope i, and many others, will give you 5 stars for many more chapters. Don't be bashful. be strong.......

Continue it! The ending just leaves you hanging! I loved it!

anymore of this?