All Comments on 'Their Toy Ch. 03-04'

Well put together, and fairly erotic at that. Might I suggest you focus a little more time on the descriptive language, however,the story is still a good one.

I'm sure you don't want telling about the effects it had.

Amazing. Simply amazing. And i think i'm in love with katie. O.o

Will there be more? I think he should get the girls preggers.

The story was really pretty good and I enjoyed it!. Only a few comments I would lik e to make... First, I dont care how much lube you put in her ass, if you just slam it in from the word go, you WILL her hurt. ,,,and using soap for anal lube in the sower!?? No way! Soap burns!

Great stuff. Glad he turned the tables on Marissa.