All Comments on 'Theirs - First Service'

by shyone71

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FA_JFFA_JFover 9 years ago

I like the tone you have set and hope that it continues. Male submission is too often portrayed in extremes of dehumanization. You have me hopeful of something better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fantastic :-)

Awesome installment to the series. Just love all the details and comparisons given as slave embraces the experience he so longed for. Looking forward to the continuing stories in the series 5 of 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
what a good start

want to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
The D/s capitalization makes this VERY hard to read.

I get it when you’re talking to your son but you’re writing something you want people to be able to read.

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