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by Jerrycurious

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Not bad

The style of writing and the quality of English are mediocre. For example, it would help to have more insight into Dave's mind earlier on, so the reader feels more involved. But the story idea and especially the conclusion are strong and convincing.

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