All Comments on 'They Walk Among Us Ch. 09'

Did Kevin just meet his mate?

great reading. You had me screaming at the laptop when Martina got free. And I think the last post is wrong. I bet it's her bitch daughter. that's why his were senses are going into overdrive. On a negitive side, why the hell would Kevin NOT want to hang with Jazcullen? is his stupid!! lol

What a compliment to Jaz as a writer to make her a character, even one that only appeared briefly in this chapter.

I was surprises when I saw this posted, thought for sure ch8 was the end and it would be some time for a new story or a continuation of this one...boy was I glad to be wrong. Again I have really enjoyed your take on this genre.

~LadySilverNova~

Just a quick note, Guinness is a stout not ale, it's home is Ireland not the UK.

Looks like more to follow. Did a double take on the lit cameo. Liked that.

I too loved the JazCullen reference - you have a good storyline going - keep it up.

Most definitely did notice the smooth flow with the lack of "saidisms" ;)

Great chapter with a lot of intrigue going on. The characters are very engaging and you have an intense, strong storyline which is great to read :) Looking forward to reading some more :)

Oh, and tell Kevin it was his loss ;) #kidding

Nice job. You nailed it!

I'm so glad you decided to continue the story. Love the military action and Kevin is such an appealing character. Ugh, Martina...can't wait until she gets what's coming to her again.

I really love this series. You are a good writer and you seem to improve with each chapter. Keep em coming - I check daily for new chapters.

Once you decided to add to this story you got this chapter done so quickly. The changes you have made to your writing style have added much to your story, it has a better flow than previous chapters. As for the story itself. Why did Luka have to die? I hope in future chapters that Kevin remembers more than the "human" thing he and his father did together. Something is up w/Kristine. Her house is being watched 1 and 2 why is she so interested in what property Kevin inherited? And now she is more than happy to be friends w/Kevin's mom and show her the castle......of course I could always be wrong...........

Great story!!!! Can't wait to read more.

Is Irish, not English. That's all. Keep up the good work xx

Thanks for pointing that out. I promise to fix it on the next Chapter. I didn't do my research on it and let it lapse. I think you will all find it ammusing at the redemption. Sorry for the mistake.

Loved it. =)

How splendid that Jaz features in your wonderful story! That was an unexpected delight!

because i like to finish what i start but, i have a horrible feeling that Kevin's gonna get his heart broke again and i really dont wanna see that happen

i love jaz and her stories.. and i am reading yours rapt attention.. very good writing here.... you have just entered my favorites right next to jaz

It looks as though others beat me to the punch on Guinness, but Crown Royal is most definitely not Scotch. It's Canadian whiskey.

I love Jazz...... & i think you are doing a pretty good job also.

i loved this jaz is one of my favs so that was awesome to see her featured in this chapter.

Love your story, have not been able to stop reading. Whanted to let you know Guinness is an Irish beer. Not from England. Thank you for all the time you have put into your story's.

On the second page you refer to a shot of Crown Royal as a scotch. It is a whiskey, but it's a Canadian one, not scotch.

I would rework the entire thing. Editing. Typos. Most of the story is about Kevin and yet there is no background. Sentence structure.