by peachesmelba
I REALLY enjoy your style of writing. Relaxed, descriptive, polished and with equal amounts of heat and tenderness.
I do believe I have found a new favorite author!
Kudos!
I agree, very descriptive. I would love a continuation, please
I enjoyed the descriptive words, too. And the inspection set a time limit that made a great climax.
Great story - nicely paced and with a nice believable progression. Someone that can actually spell and has a larger than 'normal' vocabulary. Do it again!!!!
Please continue with this story. I'd love to know what will happen next. Beautiful story, wonderfully written. Thanks for the story & looking forward for more.
great first part to this story.think about icebergs.
now for the next part.
And a budding relationship between young M and older W that simply sparkles with eroticism. You MUST continue with this theme.
Thank you for making the female character such an intelligent, well rounded individual. I rarely see stories in which the woman is science educated, brainy, intuitive n highly sexual. Need more w this type o woman. Know she represents me. We exist!