by peachesmelba
Thank you for making the female character such an intelligent, well rounded individual. I rarely see stories in which the woman is science educated, brainy, intuitive n highly sexual. Need more w this type o woman. Know she represents me. We exist!
And a budding relationship between young M and older W that simply sparkles with eroticism. You MUST continue with this theme.
great first part to this story.think about icebergs.
now for the next part.
Please continue with this story. I'd love to know what will happen next. Beautiful story, wonderfully written. Thanks for the story & looking forward for more.
Great story - nicely paced and with a nice believable progression. Someone that can actually spell and has a larger than 'normal' vocabulary. Do it again!!!!
I enjoyed the descriptive words, too. And the inspection set a time limit that made a great climax.
I agree, very descriptive. I would love a continuation, please
I REALLY enjoy your style of writing. Relaxed, descriptive, polished and with equal amounts of heat and tenderness.
I do believe I have found a new favorite author!
Kudos!