All Comments on 'Third Person Ch. 01'

by Christian Black

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don87654 over 18 years ago

Good, but could have been better

Needs more to get erotic.

S-Des over 16 years ago

Enjoyable

Very erotic story that rang true in many aspects. I thought the sex scene was a little rushed. If it had been stretched a bit, it would have added much to my enjoyment of the story. I did appreciate the way you handled the sex, just more of it next time . . . please?