All Comments on 'This Isn't Adultery'

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don87654don87654about 19 years ago
Needs a few more chapters

But not long enough.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
very good

He got the love of his life. At last a story where the fucking is loving and real, and the cheating never happened because he had the sense to marry the girl of his dreams.

I married the wrong woman 43 years ago and except for a wonderful daughter, it has been a miserable existence.

Wished I had the guts back then to say "fuck what people think" and go for my one true love of my life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
T I A

Nice twist. No thought for Amanda?

Lukas

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Good, but could have been better

She obviously did not have any kids. Now with her husband dead, perhaps you needed to impregnate her so she would have someone around?

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