All Comments on 'This Land Is Mine'

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don9721don9721about 14 years ago
excellent read.

very well done. brought some pleasure to this old man. thank you very much.

aposiopesisaposiopesisabout 14 years ago
I didn't want it to end.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
really enjoyed it

a very good story well told it will be difficult waiting for the next chapter

(Jimbo UK)

GLenbar85543GLenbar85543about 14 years ago
Awesome

I do hope more is coming shortly

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
There's fantasy, and there's FANTASY!

I'm usually good with whatever floats an author's boat- it's all fantasy anyway... but a contractor who shows up ready to work the day after the deal is made? The voluptuous sales lady who hops into bed and boinks the customer I can imagine, but the construction crew the next day? Dream on....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Welcome Back

Its been quite a while since I saw your work in new postings.

Thanks

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassabout 14 years ago
It's a good start...

to yet another story. I'm sure there's going to be a lot more action between these two hotties. (By the way, run your spell checker--it's "dining" not "dinning.") Other than that, it was a great story.

bruce22bruce22about 14 years ago
Fun Romp!

This could only happen in a dream or story! She was really agressive about what she wanted.... It might be wise to wonder a bit...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Thanks

This is one of my very favorites.

ottokarottokarover 11 years ago
your stories...

... are simply nice and wonderful!!!!!

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
I WONDER IF PAT BOONE IMAGINED

the variety of ways his song would be used, TK U MLJ LV NV

MRSheaMRSheaover 11 years ago
love it!

Very good! The pace of their intimacy, was very tantilizing! Every once in a while its good to take your time and enjoy being intimate before the mind blowing sex happens. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I loved this story and the description of the place.

I was raised on a 180 acre farm and loved it even though we moved to a 77 acre place when I was 11. I moved from there when i went into the Navy at age 18. So far the best I have done is the 2.6 acres I have now with a small lake and close neighbors but 8 miles out in the country. I love living out in the country and if I ever get rich I will buy all the surrounding property and move my family closer. Of course I will have to move to Belize for over three years until things change her in this country. I am really hoping to hit the Powerball but I know the odds against that. At the age of 75 I don't mess with women much anymore. A little rubbing etc. is about all available. Thank you for writing this delightful story. Bf

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What, No Sequel?

This is a good story, as far as it goes. Just seems to me like a "Part 2" would be

a nice way to take it further towards a full blown relationship. As it stands I give it 4 Stars. A little more story would probably have gotten it 5. But thanks for what

you did give us.

tazz317tazz317over 7 years ago
ITS HIS LAND

but the surroundings and easements are to be shared, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Title & start

The title, and the start of the story promised so much, the layout of his land. The description of the small town, clickish, people. I was expecting drama, but it turned into a cheesy fuck story that would never happen. Tex is a good writer, but he disappointed me on this one. 3 stars.

10sguy10sguyover 2 years ago
Wonderful

A perfect romance story, with just the right amount of heat to make it extremely enjoyable to read. I've enjoyed several of your stories, but the characters in this one really resonated with me. Great writing! Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story that needed another chapter or 2

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

More! Please more!

Were touched and wanting!

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