All Comments on 'Those Eyes Ch. 02'

i am totally loving your story so far keep it up, cant wait to read more.

Please hurry with the next chapter.

I am enjoying this story, look forward to the next chapter - I think I am hooked :)

ahhhhhh maaaaaaan just as i am geting into it you had to do a gliffhanger ssssssssoooooooo not fair whyyyyyyyyy lol thank yu great start please continue looking forward to more

needs to be longer or come put faster, it is good, but confusing because there isn't enough info.

great chapter once again, can't wait to read more

Several errors in 1 and 2, minor stuff, just distracting. I like what you are doing though. Keep it up.

Still trying to catch up!!!!!!

Well this really keeps the reader guessing!