All Comments on 'Those Seven Days Ch. 01'
by vyasya
- 26 Comments
shidaveover 14 years agoAt last another story from this master of cuckoldry stories.
I have no way of watching these movies mentioned but get the idea. looking forward to more.Perhaps at some stage one of the characters will recall & tell the tale about the honeymoon.
Anonymousover 14 years agoVery good opening chapter, very good indeed. Will we read about their past? Looking forward to it and of course the present. I do enjoy reading about undesireables taking the desired. Nirvana on earth as it were.
Anonymousover 14 years agoabsolutely love ur stories...read all of them..cant wait for part 2...hoping u'll add some more the of neighbor series. i like the indian themed stories. any other authors that you follow with stories like yours?
sunnyhayabout 14 years agoDear friend, This os one of the best stories I have read and depicts almost real life like situation, probaly happened in your or someone near's life. It is so realistic that you have maintained muslim name for the daughtr born with muslim father!!
Seques is highly desired telling the story during honeymoon. I feel one more child is expected of the encounter in this episide and can be named same muslim again.
I feel antara should take him up on permanant basis and vivek will be her cuckold. She cn even take muslim faith to kee it going with Yusuf.
Bravo!
Anonymousover 12 years agoKeep up the stories PLEASE! WE MISS YOUR AMAZING WORK!!
Anonymousabout 12 years agohey vyasya u r on of the best writers pls continue ur....hot writings...this is an awsome stry want read more.......1849
Anonymousover 11 years agocan u continue with ur stories specialy this one plsss.......its reallly hot
Anonymousover 8 years agoTo the author:
You are a master of Indian erotic fiction.
This story: * * * * *
Anonymousabout 7 years agoThis story was brilliantly from the loving wife's point of view.
The author builds erotic tention in the story by giving us a glimpse at Antara's innermost thoughts & memories. In a similar way we get an idea of what took place years prior, & who the stranger could be.
By the time Antara & Yusuf have sex in her office, everything makes sense.
To vyasya:
One word, BRAVISSIMO!
Anonymousover 5 years agoIn my marriage i was the first to start fooling around. My wife found out & we almost got divorced. We had one child already. At the time my wife was 30. I gave my wife the permission to get even. Initially she did not use it that i know of. We soon got our 2nd child. By the time my wife was 33 we moved to Canada. There we both discovered that white Canadian men were attracted to her like flies to honey. She would recount to me each of many instances when a men had been hitting on her. We both enjoyed those conversations. She called me the love of her life, & her best frend, & her only confidant who knows all her secrets. Her confessions were turning me on very very much. I would afterwards fuck her like a madnam i temporarily was.
I loved her more & more. I had always adored her. In those days i started to worship her. I did not know i could love her so obsessively & so selflessly.
A year later she asked me to promise her she would not lose me if she was ever to use her Hall Pass. "I haven't used it yet but i might. I need to know. Please tell me. I must not lose you..." I told her she could use the permission. I asked her whether it was someone from work. "Both of them are from work..." I embraced her, kissed her all over her face & her neck & whispered in her ear,
"My girl. I love you very much and i am proud of you... I feel I am ready for the next stage of our love life and our marriage..."
The process was gradual, so when i finally became a cuckold husband i was happy for my wife. I was happy when she was happy... I was worshipping my wife more than ever before.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoRe anon 12/29/18 'Five star stuff (*****)!'
I liked the comment very very much.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoExcerpt from an anon user's comment, which i totally can relate to.
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... white Canadian men were attracted to her like flies to honey. She would recount to me each of many instances when a men had been hitting on her. We both enjoyed those conversations. She called me the love of her life, & her best frend, & her only confidant who knows all her secrets. Her confessions were turning me on very very much. I would afterwards fuck her like a madnam i temporarily was.
I loved her more & more. I had always adored her. In those days i started to worship her. I did not know i could love her so obsessively & so selflessly.
A year later she asked me to promise her she would not lose me if she was ever to use her Hall Pass. "I haven't used it yet but i might. I need to know. Please tell me. I must not lose you..." I told her she could use the permission. I asked her whether it was someone from work. "Both of them are from work..." I embraced her, kissed her all over her face & her neck & whispered in her ear,
"My girl. I love you very much and i am proud of you... I feel I am ready for the next stage of our love life and our marriage..."
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Anonymousover 1 year agoExcerpt from the story:
"Quite a few times, Vivek encouraged her to experiment with a person, mostly after ensuring they were well endowed. Antara was intrigued by this change in Vivek but never objected to his proposals. She was amused by his selection - on the pretext that they were well equipped - of men, who were simply too old for her. The youngest person was about twelve years elder to her. Not a single one of them was attractive and almost everyone was either plump or fat. "
Anonymousover 1 year agoI'm copy pasting a user comment which i like
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Anonymous - over 5 years ago
vyasya has a way of saying so much on less than a page or two. Rating ☆☆☆☆☆ (5)!
This story was brilliantly crafted, from the loving wife's point of view.
The author builds erotic tension in the story by giving us a glimpse into Antara's innermost thoughts & memories. In a similar way we get an idea of what took place years prior, & who the stranger could be.
By the time Antara & Yusuf have sex in her office, everything makes sense.
End quote.
To vyasya:
One word, BRAVISSIMO!
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