All Comments on 'Three Become One'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
an unusual story, to say the least

Not that many couples would enjoy being with a roomie that equates consensual sex with a power grab by the roomie. There's going to be a time when someone in the trio gets hurt.

Otherwise a pretty decent story. Needs some character development if there's going to be a continuation, plus names to hang the personalities on.

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