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She went on to describe the entire ghastly encounter, filling John with sympathy for all the horrendous abuses she had suffered. To his astonishment and great relief, she was able to make it all the way through without her voice breaking once.
"You really did it," Rachel murmured, staring at John in awe. "How did you know how to help her like that?"
"Tashana's incredibly powerful... she just needed a gentle reminder," he explained, smiling as Irillith ran to her sister, tears running down her cheeks as she hugged Tashana tight.
- COMMENTS
Michael56Smith5 months agoHey 1 curious reader, any problems or inconsistences with John or the others come down squarely pn the shoulders of our incredible, amateur author, Tefler. He does tend write his creations in a way that helps his story develop, so yeah, it has on many occasions made very little sense, .... great story though, .... and there are a number of everyday things that I scream at the pages over,.... like having follow along luggage, but not a follow along <edical/crash cart for Rachel, or some follow along ammo / weapons carts for our heroes when they deploy, forget about overheated weapons, just pick up a fresh rifle and keep on blazing away, ... maybe carts with tough armor and strong shields so they could duck behind it / them to reload or take care of an injury, ... like that, .... all well within a hotshot engineer like Dana, who has the ability to readily produce such carts for the crew, or even to purchase them from an arms dealer, (Dana would then upgrade them) ... and I would love it if they had their own hover vehicles to ride over the bad=guys with, ... cars, tanks, or even hoverbikes, ... whatever, .... I think our Tef needs an editor and an assistant to help him do a better job and help to keep his fans happy, ... ;-) ttfn
onecuriousreader9 months agojohn really needs a heavy does of objectivity.. he waaay too caught up on how he feels, how the girls feels.. etc.. that he completely misses them being okay.. he wants to protect them, yet he forgets how he taught them to protect themselves.. and each other, not to mention him too.. his feelings controlling him are really an annoyance that make his so called dominance laughfully pitiful.. but I have to remind myself that he too is a broken little bird, despite the powers.. an abandoned son, a lost war veterine.. etc.
Anonymous10 months agoTaking and sharing new "discovered" tech advances with allies. Developing a psychic communication device will improve refit capacity.
They not ready, not even close to being ready to face Larn. Yet still they eager to do it. 🦁 better know what he doing.
Michael56Smith11 months ago.... the first time that I read the comparison of four fictious crewwomen to the one purple pixie, I was just certain that Faye was being under sold by quite a bit, ... then later I realized the four (4) were the Nymphs stepping up when they were needed, ... and that sneaky Tef was paving the way for some changes, .... changes that I would not like one bit, ... just like I didn't like the rape reenactment for the traumatized Maliri girl, surely Rachel would've known better than that, ... oh well, Tef is a good enough writer that I am responding to his characters as if they were real flesh on blood types, so, that's something of a good thing, right? ;-) ttfn
