by Kay-Dee
Chapter 1 was a great introduction, good description and enjoyable read. Nothing like chapter 2. Chapter 2 is non-consent and poorly written. Shame
This story is very well done, wonderful erotic images. Loved the way the author used dialogue and her thoughts as the story unfolded. Sure did capture my interest from the opening sentence and kept it thoughout. also got me very aroused, deliciously and powerfully.
Yeah, loved it too, great story from a British Liberated sensual lady, Wish there were more of your type in the UK, Most of the birds are so uptight I have had experiece with, they would ice up the freezer!
Yeah, loved it too, great story from a British Liberated sensual lady, Wish there were more of your type in the UK, Most of the birds are so uptight I have had experiece with, they would freeze the freezer!
i just stumbled across your story and was so turned on!!! i loved it and had to slip out of my pants as i was reading so i could stroke myself....thanks, hope to read more stories from you...
slut steve
This is a great story, of hidden desires and passion coming out! It's an incredibly erotic story, worth the read, sure got me --up and at em!