All Comments on 'Through the Looking Glass Ch. 05'

This story is very good. Some inconsistencies, but overall it's quite good.

Your explanation of why the portal opens every day at the same time was weak. Stretched that one a little too far.

Sooner or later, to plug another hole, I hope your main characters realize that the dimension hopping ability is something specifically about them... It's not just the result of chance. The terms dictated in your first chapter require it, and i think youll see it if you think about it.

As my history teacher put it "It was not Holy, not Roman, and not an Empire." It was created around 900 A.D. and lasted until around 1800. Mostly Germans and Austrians. Mostly Catholic, with some areas Lutherian or Calvinist. Language was German and Spanish. Great story; I'd just found it yesterday.

not the HRE