All Comments on 'Thunder Threatens Ch. 02'

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Mark737Mark737almost 11 years ago
Very nice and very hot

I find small breasts such a turn on and your story had the desired effect! This wasn't dropping the to the floor and going it. It irritates me when writers give their characters exaggerated body dimensions, baseball bats for cocks. You didn't do that. You left Pete's endowment to our imagination. If there were any typos, I missed them being caught up in the story. More please! I enjoyed reading it.

DashaboutDashaboutalmost 6 years ago
Taboo Pleasures

Amazing capture of the mix of feelings between an aunt and nephew, shame, guilt, desire and lust. Both of them suspecting the lining in each other's stares and stolen glances. You did well bringing them all together.

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A bit more time on my hands these days, so trying to get back into writing after a break from it. Feedback welcome but please don't be offended if I don't enter into correspondence. I like to explore the pre-foreplay stage, how the sexual tension begins (and who by), whether ...

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