by handyandy666620
Andy the errors made are nothing more than spellcheck getting it wrong, absolutely nothing to worry about. I loved your writing style and your subject. I found the tension arousing and hope you follow up with an equally suspenseful part 2.
A great story that I thoroughly enjoyed. It is short, arousing, and to the point.
This could be a great story. It does need some proofreading, though. Besides the grammatical errors, your first paragraph is in third person while the rest of the story is in first person.
Why is it that half the people here who come up with interesting themes don't have the education to string a sentence together? 'Smothered her skirt'? I've heard of being dressed to kill, but ....
Initially I thought, "Not another stupid student blackmails teacher story". But this one had that extra something that made it work. Well done.