All Comments on 'Ties That Bind'

Nice job -- interesting premise for a story. With a quick editing pass to tidy things up and a little more detail (what were Dale and the wives up to while Ken was manipulating Rachel?), this could be a real winner.

Loved the whole story line. would like to know the details for the wives & Dael when Ken began, but otherwise LOVED it!

left me speechless.

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disagree with the previous comments.

focus of the story was perfect.

to have added more detail in regards to what the watchers were doing would have totaly shifted perspective away from the experiences of bondage and dramaticaly reduced the intensity of the tale

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As is ..

we get a delightful tale of bondage with a dash of voyuerism , exhibitionism & seduction

I loved the way the focus switched from Amanda and Cheri, to Rachel as the soft bondage morphed into a sort of therapy for her and a recovery from her sadness at her loss.

A straight 5-stars from this reader.

It cries out for a sequel so we learn more about the relationship between Ken, Amanda, and Rachel.