All Comments on 'Time for a Show Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
twins sex on wheels

loved the twins, especially liked the overload to blackout, found very descriptive of how much pleasure he must of been experiencing.

can't wait to hear what/who they do next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Hot hot hot

Looking forward to the next hot instalment....please don't delay.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Get an editor

Needs serious post-write

walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 16 years ago
Great job again! Hurry with more chapters!

I really enjoyed this! Very erotic and exciting! Wonderful job!

walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 16 years ago
Great job again! Hurry with more chapters!

I really enjoyed this! Very erotic and exciting! Wonderful job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Write in first person! Anything else is a waste of time!

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